I Write My Thoughts
For others to attempt
Visualizing what possess
My hand to control
The plume within my grasp
Damped in the ink
Of divine love
As I search desperately
Through beloved memories
For words to fit the concept
Of my desires
Crafting lines of non-rhyming
Themes
With the awaiting verses
Soaking in the sensuousness
Of purified thoughts
Dwelling in my heart and soul
Guarded by a burning flame
Standing like a sentry
Between True love
And a scarred Heart.
The last few lines did it for me...got to take note!!
"Themes
With the awaiting verses
Soaking in the sensuousness
Of purified thoughts
Dwelling in my heart and soul
Guarded by a burning flame
Standing like a sentry
Between True love
And a scarred Heart. "
THIS is exceptional..you have become a poet of another genre..wow!
Vesna.)
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
William a wonderful poem so full of beautiful thoughts I always use divine as in reference to God- Jesus.... _ Holy Spirit. This was beautiful work once more. Stumped me on the thoughts too.
Peace,
Joselyn
Enjoyed this write William, it has a soft and sensual feeling...it also has a romantic touch, you've penned it well my friend. Simply lovely.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
I have at AD met the word "divine" several times and cannot yet distinguish if it is a reference to God or simply a substitute to wonderful or great. I usually use it to refer to God only. If that's what you mean I would understand the purified thoughts. But who can tell? Victor
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
You just get better and better..
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Protect what you already have,Put the guard on light duty,
Excellent write William.
Liked this
Michael
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Shoot the sentry, and never never never sedentry..
This is very nice, William -- heartfelt thoughts from the heart (scared), yearning for love. Very nice, indeed. You have a romantic soul, sweet poet.
Love,
CJ
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"Themes
With the awaiting verses
Soaking in the sensuousness
Of purified thoughts
Dwelling in my heart and soul
Guarded by a burning flame
Standing like a sentry
Between True love
And a scarred Heart. "
Love Tinka
William
love and peace, Carole
Vesna.)
Peace,
Joselyn
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Excellent write William.
Liked this
Michael
Love,
CJ