I'm with Robert on this, William -- your poem is like a painting, itself. Throw away the paints and continue writing your wonderful poetry which you do so well, my friend.
Love,
CJ
Sometimes the best laid plans are duped by coincidence, William. Just think how much fun it will be to go out on that "field trip" to the art store to buy new paints.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
Broke? The canvas won't be blank when you buy a new set of colors. Victor
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
WHY? You need to hit the crafts store, yet your words are picture enough..
I seem to be having a flat and dry spell myself...but you William have penned another interesting twist on this theme...excellent
love and peace, Carole
William,
You might try looking again, for there seems to be a bit more color on the pallette than you once thought!
I had not problem seeing it.
Grand write!
Lisa
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
Well done,William,I think we all have a mental block now and then,Comparing painting to writing was a good idea.
Enjoyed this write,we all can relate.
Hang in there William...
enjoyed this write, I love to write and have on occasion experienced "the blank page" and I also love to sketch and have experienced the "the blank canvas" but I've been told that I never run out of things to say...one would think that I would never have a bland page or canvas...or so my husband says.
Enjoyed this one, cleverly written.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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George
Very well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Regis
Love,
CJ
peace and always His Light,
Joselyn
I must admit...it has been a while since I touched a paint brush myself!!
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Susan
love and peace, Carole
I seem to always scratch my
pencil on paper though...
A keeper of a write William..
You might try looking again, for there seems to be a bit more color on the pallette than you once thought!
I had not problem seeing it.
Grand write!
Lisa
Enjoyed this write,we all can relate.
Michael
enjoyed this write, I love to write and have on occasion experienced "the blank page" and I also love to sketch and have experienced the "the blank canvas" but I've been told that I never run out of things to say...one would think that I would never have a bland page or canvas...or so my husband says.
Enjoyed this one, cleverly written.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Were squeezed flat and dry
I think many artists have experienced that, and I hope all those bright colorful hues return tomorrow!