Baby (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

Not sure if this was about a baby left, as in giving a child away, or left just out of sheer exhaustion...I have been in the position of leaving a baby, once I know they are clean, dry and safe in their bed, in order to retreat for air, so that I can go back inside to deal with the unending chore of caring for a newborn. Many a times, you feel as if the little one has sucked the life out of you, and then you go back inside and say, they are the reason I live!
Great penning here William!
I love babies! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 2, 2007

Very emotional my friend, moving as well, enjoyed this beautiful write very much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2007

Deep touching poetry.....a reality to some!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 2, 2007

Deeply touching William and so well penned.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 2, 2007

Moving write indeed, Wiliam!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

OH I did not want to cry tonight I wasn't expecting this powerful poem and message.............
Bless you,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

Or did the Stork leave it there?

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

This is a heart touching write, William...these days a very sad reality sometimes
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

Very touching indeed,well done...HUgsssssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

A far too often occurence these days it seems, William.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

As a human, it tears me inside out to know, young Mothers give birth feeling that desperate. As a Mother, it angers me. As a child, I count my blessings for having a Mother that cared.
Touching write William.

Lisa

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

Very uplifting poem and this seems drawn from today's headlines. Excellent choice of words, William.
George

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Very real life indeed. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.

rb

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Sad but so realistic. It's pity some mothers abondon their child like this. Where has love gone, I wonder!!! Victor