Dreams Of What's To Come (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Truly engaging write, William; touches upon so many emotions we all share in one form or another. Well done, Poet.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

I agree with Carole this one tugs at the heart...makes one stop and think about the reality of what's going on in our world today! You've penned it well...my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

On this gloomy day, your sad lament tugs at my heart strings dear friend...fantastic writing, William
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

This one William grabs the reader for a response and action.... Bless you,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

"Dreams Of What's To Come"
Yes, I quite understand I have had those same thoughts.
Probably since there have been so many deaths later, and especially when it is the military and we know the last of the last...the Old Glory presentation. Yes, a Marine can wonder, guess it is a way of pre-prep you know something you know is someday inevitable.

It was ironic that I came here to drop you off a little note about a military posting and found you also have posted a military related poem. Take care William as always~love to you and yes you will never be forgotten, I do not think.

Semper Fi all the way and forever William...
From the Heart of an Artist...and a Marine...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Very deeply sad write my friend...to say the least I would be plain "pissed off" if I ever have to get bad news from your side of the world...now no more sad thingies OKAY!!

BIG hug and LOTSA love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

A very sad but outstanding write my friend,Well done,
God Bless,

Michael

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

T.A.P.S. cuts through me everytime I hear it William. There is not one soldier that leaves here that does not go with my undieing admiration and sincere gratitude for the service he/she has selflessly given. I think we all have fleeting thoughts about our death, but the soldier learned long ago that each day he/she would dance the dance with lady death and was grateful for the days that she moved on to another partner. This is a fantastic poem, with a bit of your soul bleeding from your quill and on to the page.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Every time I hear Taps, I stop, and I remember, William. And I truly hope no one ever forgets.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

I would say this is so sad but when we reach certain ages in our life, we begin to wonder when, how, where and will I be missed. You have painted a melancholy picture. Great write.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Oh man, this brings back memories from the soul, William. I still can't hear "Taps" without crying. You've done a fine job writing this.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

As a long term veteran, I thank you for sharing these thoughts. They are shared by many thousands who have worn our nation's uniforms.

Always,
randy

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Sad but great poem. Any soldier/sailor/pilot could end up like that. Pity we are always at war in some place or other. Victor

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

This seems so real as though someone you know has gone through this and you felt compelled to write for her/him.. Very sad this one but also VERY GOOD!
George

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 11, 2007

The imagery in this splendid poem is stunning, William! It is an exceptional write!

Love,
Eileen