Hi I am Gabrielle
Grandpa's Granddaughter
I bet you started to cry when
you wrote this poem.

love Gabrielle

Hi I am Brianna grandpa's granddaughter
I think this poem was a sad poem
Because the way you wrote it almost made
me cry.

Love, Bri-Bri

Outstanding write I do hope
You feel better soon I have chronic pain
And nerve entrapment on my neck and shoulder
So I do know how you feel
Take care and take your medicine!
Love and Peace to you always
your friend...Morning Star

Cuts to the nerve of it, simply, profoundly.

A wonderful write about a part of life that affects so many, I found myself agreeing and relating as I read...you've penned an exceptional write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Been there, doing that.
Why does it have to hurt so much.
You do good work, William.

Elizabeth

my friend...you have this ability to take something so common and turn it into something better...this piece is remarkable in that it touches so many...its almost as if you were looking into your readers lives. I found myself nodding as I read this, cause it so well sums up my existance, especially of late.

I agree getting old sucks...and taking medication sucks too......but it is still great to be alive....specially when all thingy's like aches and pains are pushed aside!!

Love Tinka

Excellent writing,I hope you start feeling better soon dear man....Hugss

A process of aging
Something I wish
Not to embrace
As part of my existence

I think you speak for all us aging beings, William - but life goes on - and we must enjoy what we can of it.

William,
Maintance drugs have an effect on us for surrivial once they enter our lives. I think many can relate to this poem....

Peace & Light Always,
Josie

William--
Did you read my mind? I'm experiencing the very same thing. Great, intuitive write.

Thanks,
George

Growing older is certainly not for whimps or sissys, is it William. It can get to the point where pain is our daily proof that we are alive. When we are young, we refuse to believe that one day we will struggle with the difficulties of aging, but be it pain that tears at our heart from a lifetime of disappointments or physical pangs from our bodies struggling with arthritic changes, we learn that struggle is as much a part of life as joy. Nice work, William.
Take care,
Sherry

Pain is like a rash, if you tend to forget that its there it will come faster than a bug in a windshield.
Take two tablets and see me in a couple of days if it didn't help.
Pay my nurse in front and have a nice day!
Cheerfully
Georg

I know the feeling well William..
Hang in there....

I hear you brother! I'm fighting pain right now and hoping I can get some sleep soon.;-) Excellent poem William, beautifully written!

Love ,
Eileen