Him" (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2007

Very touching,excellent writing as always sweet man,Hugssss

Reviewed on June 7, 2007

a very moving tribute, william... thank you for your military service; sadly many returning vietnam vets were treated shamefully-- most people understand that, NOW. clearly not enough was done for them-- and that pattern continues today...
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

He will never be gone. A beautiful poem William. And just a small thing. . The vets from Nam will never be forgotten by me my friend. Never. You guys were and still are the cream of the crop in my eyes.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

You touched me with this one my friend, an emtional write...enjoyed this much, thought provoking indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Interesting write William..

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Forest gump springs to mind...

Were you a poor bugger in NAM, as a kid we felf sorry for the way america diss's it's troops.

Our Nam, the falklands was fun on the return, women were half or fully naked for the boys, not that I noticed....

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Wonderful write, and he is still there...Best wishes JDM

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Emotional offering my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Well done William you held my interest from first word to last.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

I agree with Georg, this is a deeply moving tribute, well written William!

Eileen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Imaginary or not, the one standing by us over there in a place with bullets wearing many names,is the one that would die together with us.
We tend, in moments of happines, to forget he was always there.
Excellent tribute.
Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

William, Excellent write, so much emotion and imagery in so few words. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

I'm sorry for your loss. Powerfully penned excellence in poignant memory...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

What a powerful pen, Bill. I too believe you will sees 'Him' again on another plain...Beuatiful write,

Peace always,
Dan

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Bill,
I really cannot find the right words for this poem except that is has absorbed me and made my soul sad. Ah, but therein IS the wisdom.

George

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Excellent write, William; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

I think you will see 'Him' again, my friend. I once thought I lost mine, but thankfully, 'He' came back, and I'm very glad he did.