We were Deeply in love
As I gently buried her
Within my passionate embrace
Our hearts beating
In unison
Two souls entwined
As one.
With tears in her eyes
She hesitated
But proceeded to narrate
The truth she withheld
From me.
A sad tale
She whispered in my ears
Of never experiencing
The meaning of love
Each tear told a tale
Her once lover
Mounted and dismounted
Just to satisfy himself.
There in the heat
Of my passion
And her saddest moments
Of a confession
I promised
Her most infinite moment
Of her life
Was yet to arrive
One she will treasure
Eternally.
I maneuvered her
Where she will be in charge
Taking me at her pace
To ride me sensuously
Like gentle ocean swells
In slow motion.
She closed her passionate eyes
As I guide her there
Where I promised her
I would
Through numerous moments
Of exploding volcanic tremors
Moments she never
Dreamed of
A she approached the gates
Of ecstasy
At the off shores
Of infinity.
She Melted
Into my waiting embrace
Placing her head
Upon my chest
Closing her eyes
As she descended into
The utopian dreams
That await her
As this passionate love
Left two souls
Spent
Floating in the warm juices
Of the night.
A passionate write my friend, sensual and romantic! Outstanding write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
William...Sizzling write my friend,thoroughly enjoyed,nice to read your work again...you take care and as soon as I find my way around the Den again (LOL), I look forward to reading your works of art...Big Hugs, Peggy
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Hi William...just popping in to see what you are writing and enjoyed this poem very much.
Susan
myspace.com/happyscribbler
William, passoniate and very believable, steamed up my glasses, but kept me wiping the steam off the lens. Romantic, alluring, and in a voice of truth. Good Job!
Whew! This was hotter than I thought...must be those hot flashes jumping at me, and off the screen! LOL!
Outstanding, sensual and definitely very romantic!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
William,
This is what true love is all about and many seem to lose sight that a partner's "participation" is just as important--if not more--than ours. Great write!
Wow what a Magnificent write, true romance
This piece expresses deep feelings of love
And melting moments of eternal bliss
Love and passion and romance is dripping down from
This page my friend!!!
Love Peace and much much Happiness!!
Morning Star
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
Susan
myspace.com/happyscribbler
Such a deep insightful offering!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Outstanding, sensual and definitely very romantic!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This is what true love is all about and many seem to lose sight that a partner's "participation" is just as important--if not more--than ours. Great write!
George
This piece expresses deep feelings of love
And melting moments of eternal bliss
Love and passion and romance is dripping down from
This page my friend!!!
Love Peace and much much Happiness!!
Morning Star
And, know that I'm fanning as fast as I know how. - Bill