Lost (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

You just shared with us what must be part of what's inside so many soldiers heads, and in the minds of those who live in ghetto war zones around the world in every nation, including ours. Also this shows a psychological desertion as well, not knowing where to go, to which I share with anybody who is having a rough time the following:
"He's an On Time God, yes He is! Oh He's an On Time God, yes He is. . . He may not come when you need Him, but He's always right on time, He's an On-time God, yes He is!"

God bless you Bro. William,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 25, 2007

William, I like your metaphor in this writing, nights can change the mind, causing bad dreams of the happenings of a terrible day. I think you did a great job on this writing!

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 25, 2007

I can relate to the metaphor of this...the taking solace in the night and dreams after being tortured by the reality during the day...outstanding write here my friend.

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

Excellent write William...Peggy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

Excellent offering William!!

Got lost in the imagery of this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

Torment writen in a divine way....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

My vision is blest
With a Galaxy of stars
To lead my way .

Blessed, indeed, I'd say, William.

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer

Reviewed on June 24, 2007

Such vivid imagery and depth of emotion William. Best wishes,
Barbara

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Excellent writing dear william,enjoyed sooooo much...Hugssss

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

The weather can really get to everyone, but I'm so glad you can write a great poem about it. Very creative indeed!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Compelling and powerfully meaningful, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Well You are correct the hot sun
Is tormenting and burning me,I live in the desert I know
How you feel, take Ed Matlack advice and get some corona and lime!
Excellent Poetic piece filled
With outstanding Imagery and love the tone
Keep that Flooooooow is great!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Get yourself some Corona & lime and think cool thoughts and say goodbye to those hot summer desert winds...e & r

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

It's like you're lost but you're not lost. Very intriguing pen.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Exxotic places but just hide from the sun. Full of imagery that leads the reader through the journey. Well done!!

George

Reviewed by Anna M

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Even though the journey you speak of sounds treacherous, you write about it with such poetic beauty.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

For some reason this reminds me of,
Neil Young's "A horse with no name"
An inovative poem William...