I’ve come to the crossroads
Of my life
In a true to heart search
of my creative soul
Am I writing what I honestly
Wish to express
From the depths of my heart?
Am I just rambling on?
Writing whatever muse sails
Through my hungry thoughts
Is there an inter sanctum
In the unknown or lateral dimension
That awaits me?
Where I can Open my heart
Allowing it to bleed
Onto the blank parchment
Of Knowledge
Staining it with bestowed
Wisdom
Writing unimaginable words
Once lost
Within uncertain crevasses
Of dreams undreamed..
Bleeding our words on the paper... I've said similar things. Poets are amazing, aren't they? Opening their souls and leaving the soft underbelly exposed and vulnerable. We all hope our words will be remembered... Available for some future reader to stumble upon and ponder.
I like this one, William. Thanks for sharing your soul with us.
True hmmm I thought you were writing from your heart however, only you will know from where it comes.
On another note often times I think some works (no one in particular)are for "our own eyes only" and one does not have to display every crack and cranny of themselves...EXPOSE'...then I believe some writers may believe everything they write is worthy of another's read and that may not be necessarily true either.I believe as a writer/poet there should be some things left to the imagination...mystique...but hey only one woman's opinion.
Write of substenance...goals in mind...or whatever suites an individuals fancy...I take the latter.
SEMPER FI...as long as it is that way, it is all good!
~Gwendolyn
I enjoyed this write much my friend, I must agree with Susan I don't know that we can choose our muse, I too think that our muse chooses us, and if we write from an honest heart...our writing will be blessed, and bless others! Enjoyed this heartfelt write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Wow beautifully expressed thoughts
Just let those feelings flow unto the page
Your muse is overflowing let your mind drift to
Very cord of your soul and write!!
Love Peace and Joy hugssss to you always...Yolie
William, this is truly a wonderful provoking poem. I say, "Let that pen flow and write what feels like coming out...don't hold back, let the words roll." Many times I write something and can't believe I've written it...I just let my mind take over as I write. I already love your writings and find them to be interesting and well thought out! Thanks for sharing this worthwhile writing.
You've done it again. Your writing is excellent as deeply enriched by your use of words through metaphoric manner. Enjoyed this all the way through. Keep writing as inspired.
"...allowing the bleed onto the blank parchment of knowledge..." is the truly face of a nonconformist poet that will question the whys and the hows until his pen is dry, but not the flow of his thoughts.
Academically perfect.
Georg
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Beautiful words spoken William, keep the pen flowing,you share an outstanding writing ability. Hugs, Peggy
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
I like this one, William. Thanks for sharing your soul with us.
True hmmm I thought you were writing from your heart however, only you will know from where it comes.
On another note often times I think some works (no one in particular)are for "our own eyes only" and one does not have to display every crack and cranny of themselves...EXPOSE'...then I believe some writers may believe everything they write is worthy of another's read and that may not be necessarily true either.I believe as a writer/poet there should be some things left to the imagination...mystique...but hey only one woman's opinion.
Write of substenance...goals in mind...or whatever suites an individuals fancy...I take the latter.
SEMPER FI...as long as it is that way, it is all good!
~Gwendolyn
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love,
Susan
Wish to express
From the depths of my heart?
You always do and the words that flows from the depths of your heart, is always so beautiful, William ... hugs
Just let those feelings flow unto the page
Your muse is overflowing let your mind drift to
Very cord of your soul and write!!
Love Peace and Joy hugssss to you always...Yolie
Love Tinka
Regis
George
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Wish to express
From the depths of my heart?
I think you just did!
Rose
Academically perfect.
Georg
Love,
Eileen
Luv-N-Hugs,
Pat
I agree with Ed....