Slave Of Your Dreams (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

AN IMPOWERING SENSUAL POEM . Its gentleness stirs the romance of the soul!,.....M

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

A most desirous place to be: someone else's dreams whether slave or not. Good pen and this piques the curiosity of this reader....

George

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Wow William This is great, soft and gentle and straight from ther heart.
Very well written.
Rose

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Wow, a sensual write my friend. You've penned this one well, gentle and just enough uncovered to peak the curiosity of the reader! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Don't you love hearing that chains rattlings?
Happy slaves? who tought that one up?
Only a romantic, a good one.
Georg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

to be a slave of dreams can be quite liberating ...

lovely romantic poem, William ...

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

William, full of romantic memories...taking the reader to a tender moment you captured in this writing, "I read your desires within every movement, you make with the voluptuousness of your body." Images of a beautiful woman is displayed here...I'd say this is a great poem! I liked the picture too...is it of you?

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

Wow what a romantically Sexy view of thoughts!!
Love your well chosen words and that
Tender romantic voice of a lover who has romance
in his mind before he dreams great imagery
Just fantastic Piece!!
Love peace and Joy Hugssssto you...Morning Star

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

A sexy hottie for sure! I'm sure any hot blooded woman would love to have you as her love slave in her dreams ;) Wonderfully written! hugs

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

Hey was that you at a young age...sweet legs....wow!!

You were a cute thingy MAN!!!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

"D'Artagnan" I always knew that name suited you. Beautiful romantic heart, even if the six pack is not as defined now! Lovely poem.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

Need to work on the six pack, if not drink shorts..lol
WTG man of dreamy land...

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

Very romanic dream William, great picture of your youthful years...Enjoyed reading your poetry, excellent! Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

WoW! "D'Artagnan" what woman wouldn't want such a slave in her dreams;-)! You're such a passionate romantic!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

D'Artagnan, You Look Mahvelous, as Billie Crystal would say! And this is a mahvelous poem.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

"D' Artagnan" good write, great dream.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

You're a great romantic, William. Who would not want to be a slave to a lovely lass? Victor

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 23, 2007

It's Only Me
A long, long time age
Before there was light

"D'Artagnan"