Mind Games (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

A lot of poeple play mind games William and it definitely takes two. Nice write.

Rose

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

Interesting write that I definitely liked.

George

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

A most wonderfully intriguing poem, William ... I'd like to know what kind of thoughts you planted in her mind :) hugs

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Two ticks and a Dash...for this mind game thingy you wrote!!

Hey Sir “D’Artagnan” william bonilla...you have a great tan on your new Bio Pic...send some of that sun over this way....flippen cold here!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

A case of it takes two to tango, and what a great poem you've penned. Great imagination. Victor

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

William, the game can always be played by two & you've describe this great in this poem...I found this to be an excellent poem and I'd say you have a keeper here. Loved it!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

William,

Effectively thought provoking, an excellent write. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

two can play the same game, when you play mind games. nice write.

peace,
dan

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Exceptional write William.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

The tick and the dog become one, share the same blood, life force. Intriguing write William.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Now is my time
To play her Mind Games

Most intriguing, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Fantas-tick write William, I thought diffently about that line, guess
my thoughts are on romance...very truthful words about mind games, Loved the reading of your work...Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

If she read "like a tick embedded on a hound's head"...no fellow musketeer will save your ass from parking on the couch a few nights.
Overall, the poem not only says how devoted you are to her or how your heart are aiming at, it also says about giving withot reservations, with that soul purity which only the truth can hold.
Excellent.
Georg