Please Let Me Sleep (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Yep, those terrible twos
Hope you get some shut eye William..

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

What a cute kid, you can sing this to her when she wakes up, or when she needs to go back to sleep, or whatever kids do. Nice write.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Oh my goodness...this made me wanna sleep too....off to bed now!!

Nighty-Night....ta-rum-ta-ta-tum-ta-tum......lol!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Awesome and she is adorable
Sweet heavenly dreams to Vanessa
Absolutely a beautiful tribute
And stunning ode!!
Hugsss Love Peace and Joy and a big kiss to Vanessa....Yolie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

*quietly* Awwwwwwww! Beautifully imaged and versed: goodnight, Vanessa. :) Well done, William, congratulations!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

a divine capture, william. well done!
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Nothing sweeter than a contented, sleepy baby. Lovely work and beautiful baby, William.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Your Little Cupcake is adorable, Grandpa, as is your poem!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Absolutely beautiful but she just wants to sleep. Delightful write. Thank you for sharing.

Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 27, 2007

Why is it that holding a new born child get all the agression out and a flood of protecting feelings coming to take its place?
With Please Let Me Slep just you don't only give a tribute to the new born but also to everyone out there that make themselves a living cocoon around the child.
Well done!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

And it is why we have a second childhood, when we prefer to sleep too. Beautiful picture and poem. Victor

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

The poem and picture are absolutely priceless!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

William, this is a treasure...beautiful poem...you should have this framed and give to her when she gets older. She is an adorable baby and so beautiful!! Enjoyed this much!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

So very sweet and such an endearing little beauty is she;-) Proud Grandpa, William!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2007

William a bundle of joy and beautiful I adored that picture... A wonderful poem for your sweet grandaughter..

Peace & Light,
Josie