It was an unholy night
He was drawn to her
Like a witch’s brew dose to
those of the unknown.
Her image he stared at
It seemed she was searching
Deeply into the pit of his soul
With her sensuous sapphire eyes
Her smile though beautiful
Was hideous. it never fades
From the loveliness
Of her face.
The burning passionate flame
Within his soul
Was like a furnace
In Hell
Forging a love never
Recorded by men.
For no one in this world
Could ever love a woman
As deeply
As he was in love
With her.
She once typed her heart
To him on that green screen
That glares
Within his darken den
On what they though was
a stormy night.
A horror of a storm was brewing
On this unholy night they shared
With each other
But for them it was true love.
Thunder roared
Within their rooms
Lightening flashing
Kris crossing across their
Computer centers
With the unearthly storm
Brewing.
They typed away words unworthy
Of repeating in a frenzy
when he grabbed himself
With one hand
As in a passionate dream
From hell.
Her hand slowly and expertly
Caressed and surveyed
Her most erotic sensuous zones
Of a barbaric passion
Born in the abyss
Of the bottomless pit.
They each typed the ugliest
Obscenities
Ever imagined by men
Words so vile
No man would ever dare
Whisper
In the noon of day.
From a distance
On a beautiful clear
Star bursting night
One can see
With awe, fear, and disbelieve
A storm brewing within
Their shade drawn windows.
Sounds of thunder,
Flashes of lightning resembling
A hidden strobe light
Gone out of control
The occupants of the obscene
Dwellings
Both fainted into the aftermath
Of an ecstasy born
From the darkest moment
Of two dethroned angels
Passionately learning cyber love
On a green screen.
Oh my! I often wondered what the fascination of cyberlove was all about,and your description is so intensely vivid with vibrant images that it had my ears burning while I was blushing. Wow! You really nailed this one William!
Wow this is different intense
Very dark passion and ecstasy!
I like it its beautifully written
And expressed excellent flow and vividness
Outstanding ending!
Love Peace and Hugsssss...Yolie
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
Wow, I don't believe I've seen you write dark poetry before, but boy's oh boy's is this good! Blessings, Holly
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
Wonderful writing sweet william,enjoyed as always,glad I am back to read your wonderful work again...Hugsssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xo
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
A dark poem worthy of a great poet. Your fantasy know no bounds. Victor
Wow,
I have to agree with Belle. Well done showing the darker side of man. Love to never be...... just unholy extacy.
This gives a whole new meaning to "Hard Drive".......LOL
Another fantastic write dear William, you typed your desires well I must say as so many passionately are learning of cyber love on a green screen. Thank you for sharing.
William, a darker side of the man. It is quite well written and I can feel your frantic passionate karma in this piece. I really couldn't stop reading it, it is outstanding in my book!!! Never listen to unfair comments by people who do not understand good poetry when they read it.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Very dark passion and ecstasy!
I like it its beautifully written
And expressed excellent flow and vividness
Outstanding ending!
Love Peace and Hugsssss...Yolie
Love,
Chanti Lace xo
I have to agree with Belle. Well done showing the darker side of man. Love to never be...... just unholy extacy.
This gives a whole new meaning to "Hard Drive".......LOL
Walt
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Great, The Darkness of Passions rocks in my book.
Georg
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"