Spoiled (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 15, 2007

Such an image of life. And we do what we have to do. Great write.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Very imaginative and thought-provoking! Given the extent of the drought out this way, desert images are all too apt. Blessings always, 'Pea'

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Wow, what deep and emotional write about life my friend...thought provoking and captivating as well with powerful imagery!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Interesting look at how the path of a life can be changed by an unexpected contact...captivating thoughts, William
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

William I think that we are all spoil
In different ways I know I'm spoils too!
Captivating view of thoughts!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

You might say that. Excellent writing again William.

Walt

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

Fascinating, Captivating, and Quite Thought Provoking, my friend!

And I think far too many modern day humans are now spoiled - rotten.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

William, love the metaphors throughout this writing...must say, it is profound and left an impression on this reader. This is definitely a great write!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

:) How could we live without the creature comforts? Like A/C--Gad. Don't even want to think what that was like....well done, William, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

Ahhh, to be spoiled. I know I am - got a great husband!

Kathy

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

Aren't we all as we read your well penned lines. Bravo! PLB&G. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

William,
This is very epic, like a wise tale of some sort..Very different and very well written..I like it..
So how's my collab going that I sent you?
I will await your penned words.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

WOW!!! that one we saw not coming!
Kind of fox-hole fatalism as the dice is cast but not from your hand.
Brother, if you are spoiled...I am rotten!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

You?? SPOILED?? Never! Never in a million years! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Excellent poem; very well penned! BRAVO! :)