By: William Bonilla (D’Artagnan)
&
Amber V Moonstone
10/10/07
~~~~*~~~~
William
~*~
I visualize you like a dream
Undreamed
You stare at me sensuously
Eyes interlock
In passionate desires
With the wonderment of love.
First words slowly sail
Through the air
Carried on the wings
Of Pegasus.
Cupid aims a bulls eye
The arrow marked it’s target
Passion stir
Where there was once
A broken heart.
You mended my heart
Nursed my soul
Nourished my passionate desires
At The Gates Of Ecstasy.
Amber
~*~
The Gates await your arrival
like a lover awaits her soldier
The battle has ended
you have surrendered
to my passionate call.
Only seeing black and white
for my passionate manly knight.
You are not in darkness any longer,
My light radiated through your solitude.
Never again shall you dwell in stagnant wonder
Only flying toward me in splendid thunder.
You are no longer lost or alone,
surrender is so sweet a tone.
Words whispered, will never be forgotten
when our passion re-unites there
at the gates of our ecstasy!
William Bonilla
&
Amber “V” Moonstone
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Reviews of "At The Gates Of Ecstacy ( Collaboration )"
Oh! I can just hear this put to music, as you flow is just so smooth, the romance just perfect! one can feel the longing in both of your words.
Reviewed by MoNi Harrell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
Hey William, Long time no see! I'm glad I ran into your poem this morning. Your collab is well worth the reading my friend. I especially love these lines ****You mended my heart
Nursed my soul
Nourished my passionate desires
At The Gates Of Ecstasy.**** Your poem is a real beauty! Take care and I'll chat with you soon. Hugs and love, ~MoNi~
Amber & William, I'll have to repeat myself again, this is truly passionate, alluring, satisfying, and beautiful! I like both of your versions and felt they complimented the others and William your response was fantastic! An exceptional writing.
Another beautiful and passionate write
And a stunning collaboration
This is very well expressed and written
Ode of the gates of ecstasy!!
Enjoyed reading this very much!1
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
Cher D'Artagnan et Mademoiselle Amber votre ecrìre est plus et plus de rut, s'il vouz plaît contrôle toi-même!!!!!!!!!
Or....you are getting too hot, if you come nearer of each other there goes BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg
Thank You Amber
For your beautiful review of our Poetic Collaboration
Yes I too am enjoying this series, wanting to make it more romantic as we continue on our journey, to The Gates Of Ecstasy
Peace & Love be with My Dear Friend
William,
This is so awesome! I believe we have such a unique poetry connection..I love this collaboration, we are getting closer to uniting, isn't it exciting this journey we are taking...I can't wait to see what transpires myself, how cool is that?
You, my dear friend are such an amazing writer. I love the part "carried on wings of Pegasus". This has been so wonderful to work on this passion series of poetry. To more ground to cover and a continuation of these lovelorn souls.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
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Nursed my soul
Nourished my passionate desires
At The Gates Of Ecstasy.**** Your poem is a real beauty! Take care and I'll chat with you soon. Hugs and love, ~MoNi~
Cheers! to the two of you.
Kathy
And a stunning collaboration
This is very well expressed and written
Ode of the gates of ecstasy!!
Enjoyed reading this very much!1
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
Walt
--RaeLynn
Christine
Or....you are getting too hot, if you come nearer of each other there goes BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg
Love,
ET
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
For your beautiful review of our Poetic Collaboration
Yes I too am enjoying this series, wanting to make it more romantic as we continue on our journey, to The Gates Of Ecstasy
Peace & Love be with My Dear Friend
William ( D'Artagnan )
This is so awesome! I believe we have such a unique poetry connection..I love this collaboration, we are getting closer to uniting, isn't it exciting this journey we are taking...I can't wait to see what transpires myself, how cool is that?
You, my dear friend are such an amazing writer. I love the part "carried on wings of Pegasus". This has been so wonderful to work on this passion series of poetry. To more ground to cover and a continuation of these lovelorn souls.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
annie
love and peace, Carole~
stay safe
Ron