The Beast Within (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Well done William
Happy Everything

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

You convey the feeling almost too well. Who among us has not seen those bloodshot eyes staring back? But methinks that a sensitive and empathetic soul like you will not wait in vain for those ecstasies. The strength of your love shines through in a way that tells me love, and not the beast, will triumph! <3 Pea <3

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

...ghoulishly intriguing Wolf Man...see you at the ball

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

They warn others
Of the beast
That walks upright
On the nights, of the full moon.

I sure hope you are attending La Belle's Halloween Ball. Lots of vampires around, but not enough Wolf Men.

Pee Wee Wolfman Ed

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

You are gone my friend, one of the Ulysses Sirens got to you, lie back and enjoy the ride, this come once in a lifetime.
The Maidens should be crowding your doors.
Georg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Now Wiily, the beast in you is charming and I think I would be charmed to be a victim.
Susan

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

ooooo William, continue to hold the beast at bay and join us at Belle's Halloween Ball!
Love,
Evil Enchantress

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

A fine insight William ...
Richard

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Wow! a little darkish there...but you kept me to the very end.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Well William your soul and heart
Controls the beast within!
Excellent imagery and flow!!
Brilliant writing!!
Love Peace and hugsss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Oh Count William - let's hope they miss your heart, for without you the world would have nothing. Suppressed feelings are to our detrement.

Kathy

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

A thought-provoking piece. Yes, it's the beast within us that needs controlling.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

So Halloween-ey, William! There is no fear like the one that resides within us.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Very creative William, frightening and thought provoking!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

William, I found this interesting & exciting as I read it. Suppressed feelings living inside but the heart & soul controls the beast. Nice work!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Nice Blood Moon poem, William, I happen to like that beast, thank you.
Peace, Love, and Light
Amber "V"