D'Artagnan At The Ball (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

William, this was so much fun to read, I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

Invisibility - the only way to attend such a gala as this. Oh what fun to see the revelers unraveling.

Kathy

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Wooooow everyone is having so much
fun at the Ball
I don't think I like to be invisible man
He was alone no one saw him!
Excellent Imagery and flow!!
Happy Halloween!!
Love Peace and hugsss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Great fun offering!!

Happy Halloween D'Artagnan !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Funny man, just imagining you are invisible don't always make it so....LOL

Walt

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Fuuny gesturing poetry. When you are invisible you are truly an alone prankster but had you been a visual...you may beat forever in the hearts of all women there.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Well done
ron

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Why D'Artagnan, you old foxy prankster...the ball will never be the same without your special touch of humor, such a fun poem. I will be spending sometime, including Holloween on the gulf side of your state, enjoying some warm sunshine...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

William, I knew it was you all along! LOL!
Funny pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Ah D’Artagnan. I will smell your blood pulsinging in your veins. You shall dance with me please? I promise not to bite too hard. Invisible blood! May I have a taste?
Love,
Evil Enchantress

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

WOW! And I thought you were coming to the Halloween Ball as a fellow Wolfman. Can you teach me to be Invisible, too? And thank God we Hairy Wolfmen don't wear pants, so you can't pull mine down!!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

You are a naughty one aren't you..Bravo, what a great disguise..I shall write a Belle's Ball poem/thanks for the inspiration.
Peace, Love, and Light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Oh you naughty boy, welcome to the ball Darlink!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 28, 2007

Watch for the Very-Horny-Don't-Get-Enough "Big" Bull he will go at any naked invivible or we will hear you howling with a higher pitch than PeeWee with his jewels caught on a beartrap.
Very very carefully brother.
You write kind of niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!
Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

hahahahaha William when you're D'artagnan, you are a sly fox;-)This was creative with a twist,and fun!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

Heeeheee!!!!! This was fun!!!!! Love this!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)