These past few days
I've been on idle, on pause,
Stuck in neutral,
Marking time like a tin soldier
On a parade field
Or stuck in a foxhole
With no one to relieve me,
Just sitting here shooting the breeze
With myself, and losing the argument
Posting old writings, I once presented
I didn't allowed
Enough reviews then
Just sitting here
Marking time, stuck in gear.
Hey, William - These times happen, and grab our soul like a clenched fist, but WE MUST RESIST! and Write what we are feeling, and how you are driven~ Will - YOU don't know me but a few words and thoughts and my deep intense color purple within myself! Want to write and stir up that muse hidden deep in you?
Let me know...
Of whatever you are feeling, I sense something reeling to be written! Just a thought, I hope you follow up on! I'll send you some ideas in a messg. Maybe It will help get you out of that rut.
WArmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Write On! on and on and on....YOUR heart is spot on!
Well, it looks [to me] that you're unstuck. Awesome poem reflecting life in all its 'loveliness.' I hadn't written much of late, but now I seem to be in a place where I can write - even if its goofy.
You know, I think it is just fine to put it in neutral,, We are living in a fast pace world,,, So,, hey sit back and enjoy the moment,,,, reflect,,,
Always, Christine
Let go the damn clutch and you will be moving forward, that is if you aren't already in reverse and wham! there you go back to the past and those nasty days that you forgot.
Why going back there? better fetch a friend and a case of Coors and look at the Autumn leaves fall as you two shoot the breeze.
Georg
William, You are stuck, does this mean it's time for another collab?
Let me know, I am always game to write with you.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Gears are meant to go in first
It will get there
Sometimes we get in overdrive and then
strip our gear?
Stay safe William...
Love,
Susan
Let me know...
Of whatever you are feeling, I sense something reeling to be written! Just a thought, I hope you follow up on! I'll send you some ideas in a messg. Maybe It will help get you out of that rut.
WArmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Write On! on and on and on....YOUR heart is spot on!
Take care.....old or not...always a pleasure to read if possible!!
Love Tinka
Love. Kathy
Regis
Always, Christine
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Why going back there? better fetch a friend and a case of Coors and look at the Autumn leaves fall as you two shoot the breeze.
Georg
Let me know, I am always game to write with you.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
It will get there
Sometimes we get in overdrive and then
strip our gear?
Stay safe William...
Mine is an article...boy that would have looked funny on the poetry site.
Walt
Love,
ET
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.