Please forgive me for not reading
and reviewing as I should be
Fact of the matter is that I am
Trveling and I don't own a lap top
So I don't have complete access
To a pc, Here is a Bit Of "The Dark"
For now. ....love you all.....
Man of Ice
~~~~*~~~~
Fearless
Courageous
Black hearted
His soul Stripped
Of all dignity
Born to raise hell
Earth bound
To wage war.
Creating famine
Bringing fort disease
Plaque and drought
To scorch the earth
All to him
Meant nothing
Cold and lifeless eyes
Like ice.
Yet she is there
Deep
Within the embrace
Of his arms
She kisses him tenderly
He swallows her tongue
Slowly into his mouth
Stealing all her juices
That belonged
To the gods.
She stares deep
Into cold brown eyes
But saw no love
Passionless
Mechanical uncaring eyes
Like those of dolls
As he stared back
At her
Deep into her soul.
She felt something cold
Slowly and deeply
Piercing her heart
She looked at him
In disbelieve
As he stealthily
Sheathed his dagger
To the hilt
Into her breast.
While still embrace
He guided her lifeless
Body
To the ground
Where he left her
There
Lying in the cold
Of death
She
Never made a sound.
WOW! Yes, that was dark, but well lit up with illumination of words!
Don't be concerned about your reviewing others/etc. Your time will be right and you could stay up all night, some other time when your heart gravitates to their rhymes...
I love your this dark writing coming from your free flowing penning!
Warm hugs and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
STay SAFE and Happy! (in your travels)
William, I love this dark stuff. I hope your travels are on a lighter note, though, LOL.
Don't worry about getting to your reviews, we all have our busy days.
R~
William, This poem, is of another side of your mind. Wow, it is probably from the files in your mind of all that you saw as a detective in NYC with some mystical added in there. I have a continuation of this about to bubble up, I shall write it and post it tomorrow. How's our collab going?
Peace, Love, and LIght,
Amber "V"
Be safe and enjoy your Holiday travels...your writing is always a treat, dark side or not!
love and peace to you and yours in this Holiday Season
Carole~
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Don't be concerned about your reviewing others/etc. Your time will be right and you could stay up all night, some other time when your heart gravitates to their rhymes...
I love your this dark writing coming from your free flowing penning!
Warm hugs and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
STay SAFE and Happy! (in your travels)
Don't worry about getting to your reviews, we all have our busy days.
R~
John
Hope this is just poetry!!
Love \Tinka
Susan
ET
Peace, Love, and LIght,
Amber "V"
Take good care,, Christine
A fine dark write..
Stay safe in your travels, and Merry Christmas.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
love and peace to you and yours in this Holiday Season
Carole~
(((HUS))) anad much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D