It was a night to remember
It wasn’t even a sensuous night
In September
They laid in their own beds
A Nation apart
Dreaming dreams
Of anticipating encounters
Showering in unison
as warm waters cascaded gently
Over their nakedness.
They visualized
Pleasures unknown
As they discovered each others
Sensuously soaping one another
Causing juices of life
To secrete with passionate desires
Clinging to their every emotion
And rhythm of their heartbeats.
With fantasies accomplished
Sensuousness met, incoherent whispers
Rendered in the heat of true passion
both spent, lay next to each other
A nation apart, as they wake
from their, dream of fantasy,
In time to click off
for a night to remember
And it wasn’t even a night
In September.
By: William Bonilla
“D’Artagnan”
01/25/08
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Reviews of "A Night To Remember"
Reviewed by carol weyler (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
sometimes, lying in the closest proximity,sharing the best you have with each other, occupying the same space, breathing the same breath, one can still..feel..so..alone...
so very poignant..
mysterianne'
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Wow! This is HOT!!! You warmed me up quick, William! hugs and love - "Sunny"
I'm chuckling to myself - my mindset didn't read this as a lust-filled poem; well, maybe a political lust-filled poem! :o) I invisioned the hopeful Presidential candidates "dreaming dreams" of future elections that would crown them as their Parties Candidate! I must be watching too much political news on TV :o)
WOW!!! that kind of thoughts can get you excommunicated!!!
I thing I will go and try that one...
Georg
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
A beautiful sensual write William, so many dreams, so many miles apart, yet the beauty of it all is still embedded within, great
dreams to share with others...Hugs & Love, Peggy
William, this poem could be taken in so many ways...that's why I enjoyed it so much. I visualized different meanings and was thankful for this wonderful write.
so very poignant..
mysterianne'
love, Carole~
So well written that it just COULD be that...
Micke
I thing I will go and try that one...
Georg
dreams to share with others...Hugs & Love, Peggy
Distances between lovers
Can lead to great passion!
Absolutely brilliant!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
Cheers,
Dan
Thanks William!
Love,
Becca
well done William...
John
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D