Wow, what a powerful piece! The title promised another one of your wonderful love poems, William but then you slapped this in my face. I love it, though it screams of agony.
Much sincerity,
Becca~
Ohhh, this is deep...and sad; a dark part of our lives that you've penned so brilliantly! Praythee this comes from your talent and not from a broken heart!
We tend to dwell on the good part of our lives with the guilt we distributed in the loss. Mending isn't that easy after we actually look at what we did later in life. It is the Hell we made and the hell we recall each time we withdraw back to it again.
Blessings and love!
Susan
William such a sad write and how many put themselves in this same situation when love has failed, life must go on for I am one who believes their are prettier Rose's out there that smell of sweet perfume not bitter and stale and so full of thorns that we can never enjoy their beauty. Thank you for sharing.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Love, Christine
Lvoe Tinka
well penned William...
John
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Much sincerity,
Becca~
Micke
Blessings and love!
Susan
This is quite a tragic love story. It is sad when we smell the roses too late...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Dee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
A sad one this is.
Georg