The Rowboat (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

There are too many of those old city lots?
Superb writing
Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Great imagery Dale!!

Lvoe Tinka

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

This poem took me there ! Great images and feeling emitted from it... Love the ending! It was a surprise........M

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Chucky darn! And I had such a nice visual, William. I was just fixin' to order a Mai Thai when you had to mention that it was just a magazine....LOL
Thanks for the short trip to paradise!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Thanks for taking us with you on your dreamy write, very vivid write enjoyed much.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

The mind is a very interesting avenue for travel. The Creator gave us a huge wealth of destinations and a great mode to get there. Your pen reminds me of this wonderous gift.
love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Skiffs ain't all bad...
Yet from below I see its a yank thing, atdemo....

Top of luck...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

William as the buses are off the road here today and we are into a bad storm, you took me away on a delightful trip and I could taste the drink I was sipping lying in the sun only to awaken me from my heaven, Great write now I'll go put a sweater on. Thanks for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Thanks for this beautiful mirage, enjoyed much! Blessings!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

|In the jungle we hadn't too many empty lots to stare at, but just the same, a lonely stalker need to be from that special breed of man that waiting an infite of time don't seems to be so long to wait.
Then, bang!!!, the sucker's down...now I can go home.

Georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Well william it sounds like you must have
spent a lot of time stake outs
Sounds very exhausting and lonely
Beautifully written and expressed!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Sounds like many hours spent on stake outs.

Walt

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

You created the perfect tropical daydream for one who is in a winter wonderland today, thank you for the visual escape William,
beautiful poem.
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

What a beautiful write...I was there with you.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

That row boat sure sounded inviting,,,great job William
:)Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

You took me there, this chilly Winter morning ... thanks for the instant vacation!! Beautifully penned and imaged, William, a keeper!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

What a sad ending to a heavenly poem, my friend. After reading your poem, and wanting to find such a warm heavenly paradise myself, I look out my window this morning, at 12 inches of new snow. I best reach for my snow shovel, and not my sun tan lotion.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Excellent writing sweet man,as always just wonderful..stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

...a beautiful picture you paint...perhaps a mirage daydream...escape and reality...two different pages.
excellent William...
John

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 31, 2008

What power words and pictures contain. Your words brought me to that ocean shore, while I type away in my mystic room, dreaming of an encour!