Now No More (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

' All that remains is that Pain now occupying a space within her heart' BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL POEM, WORDS FROM THE BOTTOM OF HEART!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Bittersweet offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Sad but thoughtfully written. People with broken hearts are, all too often, spiteful. It's good to see a less negative spin when two hearts are no longer at peace with one another :)!

Keep thy pen going, my dear.

Sandy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Her heart and pain seems a bit one sided. I'd like to hear the other part of the heart too. So sad is a lonely and open-wounded heart!
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Written with heart-touching sadness...excellent poem William.
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Losing love is hard . It can bring to srongest person to their most vulnerable depth. Your poem has captured it all......M

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

William...Truthful decribtion of the saddness of love losts...Awesome
write and heartfelt...Hugs Dear Friend, Peggy

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

...a space to radiate light...to heal...one who has loved deeply.
sensitive colors William...
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

A void to be filled one day,,,,,,,,

You write from within very heartfelt,

Love, Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

very deeply felt a passionate sorrow within...

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Yes, but when Love re-occurs the pain will be Now No More.
Beautiful, William!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

William, the pain from a lost love is as raw meat, it kills the heart for awhile and leaves a person almost totally helpless. It takes time for the rawness to heal and sometimes it never does. This is an exceptional writing and it is so true.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Touching as is well written
stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

William, a beautiful write...from the heart.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

tragic and isolative. ..
pensive and pain.t.ed. ..
a freefalling haunt
blessings~
ness

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

When love disappears is like losing a shoe in the winter snow and you aren't wearing socks...then frostbite comes in...
A twisting with pain poem.
Georg

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

William,

So sad ... poured from a soul onto my eyes ... I feel bad for you. Hopefully this is just the Muse expressing itself ... and your MIL is in my prayers, as well. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

William, This is so beautiful, very sad at the same time. Very heart touching and I know it comes from the depths of your soul..
I am sending healing energy to your mother in law, I wish for health, rejuvenation and joy to enter your life and your family's..Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

So very sad,but so well written sweetie,going out of town on business,stay safe and well OK....Hugs

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

So very sad, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

An excellent yet sad write William. All that remains is the [pain now occupying a space within her heart.
Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Excellent poem, William; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D