The Night Had Tears (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 20, 2008

Expressive write and true love came back and the tears were gone. Many won't have their true love back, but they still have the beauty of this earth like the red roses etc. Saw a beautiful red rose bush blooming as I drove to Doctor's today. God's blessings take away our tears. GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on March 21, 2008

Your gentle and loving heart ... breaks mine.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 15, 2008

...tears fall because something is recognized with so much beauty...your expression in words tell us this.
well done William...
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 15, 2008

A very heart touching write William as it fills my eyes. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Heartfelt words, very powerful expressions of painful nights without the love of your life...Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Beautiful and powerfully emotional.

Oooops this almost made me cry wooo almost broke my heart too. Hope it is not true Oh my and hugs if it is William. Goodness hope you are not sad.
Though I can understand those tears and or being lonely.

All blessings,
((( Gwendolyn )))

Semper Fi

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Tears....damn now you made my nose more snotty....very emotional!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Touching! where is my hanky?

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

William this sounds to me like now these are
Tears of joy
Excellent write and a fantastic
Vividness and imagery!
Wishing you Peace Love and Hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Seeing - and really noticing - the Sunshine in your life is full rewards for the nights of lonliness. I, too, love the final line of your poem, William: "I watched a rose bloom". Emotional...

Micke

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Poignant and tender passion in this heartfelt poem, William...excellent
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

"I watched a rose bloom". Beauty scented with emotions of a grateful heart,, well done William.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

It is always darkest before the dawn, or so I've heard it said, William. While sadness comes with the night, the sunrise assures that life continues and brighter days are in view.

Best wishes and thank you for sharing this emotive poem.

Jill

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

(((William)))

Painfully poignant - especially,

"You're home
never in my life
have I ever felt
so alone" <--- says VOLUMES

Very well penned - you are in my prayers -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Those nights had tears, but now your days once again, have sunshine!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

You are shedding tears of joy now, and no more sadness!!!!! To Spring and new beginnings..
Loved this poem, so passionate and so you.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

such deeply felt expressions of longing!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Powerful write, William; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Like a Pirate with nightmares, you dug in the sand and voil� there was the tresure, never far away and worth of those tears.

Georg