Uable to Describe (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Uable to Describe
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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To all the wondeful Poetess of the Den
Unable To describe It was never within My concept of beauty The loveliness The Gods bestowed upon you Your smile brightens Your already blest divine ness Your Lips sensuously Laced with the Ambrosia Of the paradise Men dream within their dreams. The softness of your cinnamon Coated flesh My hands tremble to caress To kiss the tenderness Of your cherry blossom lips Men crave. Your ebony eyes penetrate My soul mysteriously Searching for my heart‘s Desires. I thought I famed For my words I scribe of beauty Until My eyes were baptized With your loveliness. I find myself speechless Unable to conjure words Within my mind Totally at awe To describe The magnificent creation Of the heavenly Gods That stands before me For you are the true meaning Of Beauty. By William Bonilla D’Artagnan 09/18/07

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 24, 2008

A powerful inciteful poem. Lovely images......M

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on March 21, 2008

William "Unable to Describe" heart strikingly emotional this held attention from the beginning to conclusion. This is a powerful write and a wonderful read indeed. Blessings to you and many, many more to come.

((( Semper Fi )))
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Sounds like a lovely lady, and this is a beautiful dedication.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Whew! You have made my day!!! I am charmed to the core of my being. Your gift ... beautiful poetry ... you are da' man!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 20, 2008

You are hopeless William, romantic to the core. Beautiful pen.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on March 19, 2008

You do your pseudo justice: fiery and passionate and easily enamored...lovely poetry.

Gina

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

You paint a beautiful portrait with your
romantic and elegant words! Charming poem!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Lovely.....you romantic you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson

William, a story telling experience we could all learn from.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Stunning - what can I say, William, stunning!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

My eyes were baptized
With your loveliness.

Wow!

Reviewed by c lea harris

there are so many things that are to hard to describe, and poems are sometimes the best way to do it, just as you have in this one.
Feelings sometimes, even though sometimes are mutal can only be described in words, or just a look, that says, yea, I know how ya feel, for I've been there, walked that journey. well done my friend

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

ahhhhh! William, thank you sweetman for dedicating this breathtaking write to all the Poetess here at the Den...beautiful words! Big Hug dear friend, Peg

Reviewed by John Leko

...your passionate pen...somehow finds beauty in description...its words defy unable.
excellent John...
John

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2008

...oh goodie; my name is in there! a beautiful and flowing write....blessings~
ness

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Enchanting!

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Why William, You little devil, you are cheating on me..lol
This was such a beautiful poem, I am honored to be a poetess of the den and I shall thank you much... (when are collaborating again?)
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "Vivianna"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

lovely words

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

William,

You capture the sentiment of a man to a woman in a unique manner. The comparative of the father's love to the lover's eye is interesting to me.

Enjoyed, thanks ~D.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Passionatly well done as always, Wm.

Walt