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Listen To The Rain (Collaboration )
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Listen To The rain (Collaboration) By: William D’Artagnan Bonilla & Amber “V” Moonstone 03/018/08 William *~~ Still two stranger’s hearts Await that moment Their sole desires are to unite Staying awake In nights when dreams Bless them not Dusting the Sandman forgot Bearing feelings Dwelling within their souls Nursing hearts filled with pain. Each fantasizing Sensuous thoughts creating soft songs They wish to whisper As passion arouses while lying alone Far away listening to the rain Still nursing their pain. Oh My darling come fill This empty embrace Kiss my lips As we listen to the rain. Allow me to fulfill My desires Come make your Bed with me Upon this bed of thorns Take away all my pains As we listen to the rain. Amber** ~*~ The rain brings passionate thoughts that fill my lustful heart I long to touch your pain as I am listening to your rain. Wonderment of secret desires constantly guides what transpires Knowing your deepest pain brings this ever lustful rain. Shall the thorns that bite make way for lover's flight. In an instant I can calm your fear surely you know this my darling, dear I have hungered your scent and longed to be spent falling under your spell where painless love should dwell It is but a simple request that shall be granted and blessed with the consuming desire of our passionate bonfire.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2008

Wow !
Keep on writing, you two. Loved that one.
Amira

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 2, 2008

ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEMS!!!!!!!!! I love this sentences: ' Nursing hearts filled with pain'...'Far away listening to the rain'....'...Come fill this empthy embrace'...'Take away all my pain'...' I long to touch your pain' Liana Margiva

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 24, 2008

Once again Amber
I like to express my deepest thanks for the privelege
of accompaning me to another Lovely creative piece
And thank you, for expressing your wonderful
Romantic Poetic thoughts within our collaboration
Love & Peace be with you always

William

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 23, 2008

Another beautiful write shared by two of Ad greatest writers, thank you for sharing with us William and Amber.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Olita Williams

This is wonderful! Thoughts which one dare not express from secret access to a lovers soul. Truely touching.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Dusky and sensuous Amber and William, it is as if your thoughts touch and mingle then create this exquisite poetry...well done!
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Exquisitely said by ONE another William and Amber!
Listening to the rain, just the BEST yearning!
Glad, I didn't miss THIS stunning sensual gem!
The flames can never go out, nommatter the rain! HERE! :)
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo

STay Positive!
STay Strong!
HAPPY!Easter and NEW Spring!

Reviewed by John Leko

...two have written beautiful poetry...past...present...and future.
continued wishes...
John

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 22, 2008

I agree with the other remarks, William and Amber you make a great writing team. Well done.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

U 2 ARE THE PERFECT COLLABO TEAM!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Even that rain can't quench the bonfire! Perfecto...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Gorgeous, William and Amber, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William,
Just returned from my mini holiday, to come home and see our collaboration posted..I love how we do this...Just another example of the passion that dwells inside all of us. We are very lucky to be able to work so well together..One of these days when the rain stops falling, we will put these words into a dynamite best seller!!!!!

Peace, love, and light, Happy Easter hug, William
Amber "V"

ps, lol, I didn't know I changed my name to Heather! lol couldn't resist (Micki's comment)

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

A hotbed of passion in this collaboration...I'm not sure the rains can quench the bonfire! Romantic, indeed, William and Heather.

Micke

Reviewed by Linda Hill

William and Amber,
Beautiful poetry, sensual and softly romantic.

Blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Love, stoked by desire, a great matchmaker! right out of Romeo and Juliet, beautifully sensues! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

A teasing game, like a sensual tic-tac with words which carry sparks, then, one of this days...a few drops of gasoline here and there and....PUFF ! ! ! a uncontrollable bonfire.
Playing with matches make that happen.

Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2008

So much about the rain today. I thought only the brits were obsessed about talking incessantly about the weather... HAHA, maybe it's world over.

Kewl collab...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Sensual, beautiful, romantic. Nothing more needs to be said.