The Gray Dawn (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

This is just too beautiful for words, too beautiful.

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

Such tenderness and passion fill this romantic poem. It's like a soft carress, gentle and soothing......M

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

You speak with such a tender passion in this poem, William. Wake the sleeping Goddess and repeat your words, and ye shall reap the benefits, methinks...
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

You have captured that time in the morning when everything is just so fresh and beautiful. Very lovely poem, William.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

There is something so beautiful about a man watching a woman sleep...and the words you have written here have made it even more beautiful.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Your passion is beautifully expressed in this romantic gem,willian!

ET

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Your beautiful love shines in your poem, William ... Very heartwarming and I'm so happy for you ... hugs - Tiana

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

...passionate pen to compliment the soul of one so loved...can know no color of the ages...but only the love of eternity.
most beautiful work William...
John

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

utterly lovely, romantic, and inspiring for your sentiments show maturity and therefore give hope that lasts

Gina

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

William, hold onto the beautiful words in this writing...a great tribute to some fortunate lady. This is truly a magnificent romantic write.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Absolutely beautiful your words captured
Your love and devotion that was there the first day!
your love keeps growing deeper,and deeper as years go by!
This William is true love poetry!
A gem William!!
Peace Love and Light and hugesss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Years of love and devotion in these lines - still beautiful after many anniversaries have come and gone - stunning, William, your best, yet - tears are running down my face - thank you -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

William this is romantically beautiful.
So sweet, thank you for sharing.

Continued blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn

((( SEMPER FI )))

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Very Beautiful William,, this has such a peace and content feeling.
:)Christine

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

tenderness defined.
a lovely write, william.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Oh, how deeply in Love
My heart is
The flame that lights my soul
Still burns

It sounds like you are a very fortunate man, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

That's the words of a real and tru & tru Musketeer, I hope that those kisses save you the taste of Versailles garden's honey.

Georg

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

She will always be beautiful to you and lucky you to have her by yur side and with you. Calling her the Goddess is such a nice thing to do. Shows you really LOVE her. Neat.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Oh what a wonderful heartfelt, gentle yet passionate write! Wow, you could melt a girl's heart with this one. Very touching, reminds us that true love still burns within relationships...Enjoyed this romantic write my friend! Beautiful!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Lovely write, William; very nice! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

SWEET, ROMANTIC WORDS, FULL OF LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

This is beautiful - what every woman who has passed the blossoming years of youth would love to hear from the man she loves. This is very tender and touching.