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Brain Dead
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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Brain Dead I lay in bed tired Like a zombie Unable to close my eyes Waiting for the sandman To sprinkle me to sleep. I laid there unable to think Brain dead Nonsense for vision Traveling through my head. The blank ceiling was like a screen It displayed images Embedded in my head I saw A large gray wolf Scattering away for his life From an approaching flood He left behind The carcass of a half eaten doe. Several other images Continued flowing passing in My review before realizing The beautiful mate of my Lonely soul For at least a half century Was sleeping, dreaming heavenly Next to me. She tossed and turned Looking for a comfortable Position Her left hand Slightly touched mine I gently placed it Within the grasp of my Right hand. Her fingers unconsciously Inter locked with mine At that very moment, I felt A warm serene feeling Shrouding my insomnia ridden soul Causing heaviness upon my eyelids Drifting me into The peacefulness of her Dreams. By William Bonilla D’Artagnan 07/11/08

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

...very peacful and content, a perfect way to fall asleep.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

...the romantic quiet of the heart...in this wonderful write...takes hold of one...and shares the dream of peace.
beautiful William...
John

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Awesome! All it takes is a touch.
Lovely!
R~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

SOooooo beautiful, love Holly

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, so good to know that your passionate heart has returned. I surely miss you, please call me soon..I love this poem, it is filled with the D'Artagnan passion! The one that I love to collaborate with, the one that is alive and full of magical verses.
Talk soon, my dear, dear, friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

William, this is beyond beautiful, knowing you found the hand that gave you love and support, you were able to find a "stillness" in your mind to fall asleep. The greatest feeling is knowing you are beside the one you love and are sharing your life with. Money cannot buy this kind of happiness. A great writing.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Your thoughts are just incredible! This is divine!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

That is a grand togetherness,warm and wonderful sharing
you are blessed William!...ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

This is soft and touching as your love soon changed the thoughts in your head. How quick you could concentrate on your beautiful mate with the touch of her hand. Thank you for sharing William.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

OOOH, make your own dreams, stop stealin' hers...ed

Reviewed by Morning Star

Wooow what a comeback
Such beautiful romantic thoughts
I love it!!
Welcome Back!!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning star

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Such a beautiful poem, William ... very moving my sweet friend. Good to read you again ... hugs

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

This is really nice. I especially like the wonderful ending!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Hold on to that hand, hold on to that love and let nothing and no one pry you apart William. Gorgeous poem.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Great romantic write, and welcome back.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

They said that if love doesn't send you to the dream's world, nobody will. The romantic Musketeer is baaaaaaaaaaack!

Georg

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

So touching a write, you are so good, it is great you are posting again. Take care and sleep well. I have stars on my ceiling, yes those white glowing stars, like a child I had to have them in copying off my granddaughter. Love them, so peaceful to see as I drift off to sleep.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

beautiful!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Nice one, William; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Beautiful, very nice!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Be well. Love and peace,

Your friend,

Reg

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

William,

This is beautiful comfort - from the stresses of insomnia to gentle, peaceful slumber - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.