A Mind's Fear (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 6, 2008

'My poetry suffering as I'---I love this!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 25, 2008

you poetically described fear very well here William, consider this thought, vacation, we all take vacations, fears loom for all of us. I always say it's vacation time until,

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 23, 2008

The mind is a strange thing...carrying us to far off places, creating illusions, portraying dreams, protecting our heart, and a place for our imagination and all the creativity to seed and grow into wonderful writes such as this...well done my friend, food for thought!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 21, 2008

Dear William...you are getting better and better with each write of yours...and this is the hallmark of a genuine poet....fantastic write yet again...fantastic flow..very natural...cheers....love n luck...BHUWAN!!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 20, 2008

Wow this was some journey into your mind William
The mind is the most powerful tool
Of the human being possesses!
You must not let it take over your love for writing or
Anything else in life!!
But do remember many great poems
Are born from a wondering mind!!!
Lol that's my mind
Outstanding Write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on August 19, 2008

Been there!
R~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 19, 2008

Our minds are very powerful, William, You must not let your mind take over your poet's passionate heart and soul...I have visited that place with you, and we both have seen amazing words come from that union. Never give up hope or give in to a mindless trap...
Always grasp for the brass ring with hope and passionate embraces.
Much love, light, and peace to you my dearest friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Our mind's fears can give us our strengths,, Your words always portray powerful meaning as does this poem.
:)Christine

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

I been through this many a time. It is sort of scary but when you think it through maybe your mindjust needs the added rest. I try to rest as often as I can to be a better thinker and go getter. Good luck in your future writes.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

With thoughts of losing it
In mind
I snapped out of it

Very glad to hear that, my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Chilling write, William; hope you're okay! Well done, though...

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Lets me honest William, does a poets mind ever rest as I know mine is always wandering. A great write and Willliam we do look forward to hearing from you, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

When a jew died all the mirrors of the house are covered, you haven't yet dies but are covering all the mirrors of your life with metaphores and not deserved "mea-culpas" but if you take this path a little longer you really going to find yourself between too big mean bubbas in white jacket, not to steal your lines but to haul your ass where the wall are too soft to hit your head with a good sense.
If you are in trouble mood...drink a few Coors and throw the empty bottles on the window-shield of a police patrolcar, althought they don't wear white....
Georg

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Hey, bro' if you're sleeping at night your further from that padded cell than I am...good to see you writing every so often...Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Poets are slaves to their muses. Many nights I have gotten out of bed to write verses that scream inside my head until I release them on paper! No one can understand this need, unless they are poets. This poem was very soothing to me, as I can truly relate to it. HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Oh, man, do I know the feeling! L i v e in the cuckoo's nest!! Mind does, anyway. But then, more than a little craziness is needed to be creative. Have to risk getting out of the box!! Sometimes it is hard to get back in. . .;) Thanks for sharing this gem, my friend.
xOx Onenut Tonuthah xOx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

YIPE. Scary, the wanderings of a poet ... well done! Glad this isn't you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.