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I Met Myself
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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I And Myself

~*~

Warned

My wife once whispered

Why I am always hurrying

Back and forth

I’ve no time

For her and my seed

Though they know

I truly love them both

I must share more time

While hurrying here, hurrying there.

Soon will come a time

You’ll catch up with yourself

As I exit somewhere

Along the way.

She said to me, as she turned

Away

When I needed her the most.

 

 

I arrived home

Late one evening

Just before the setting sun

The house I found empty

All were gone

My furniture, wife and son

What have I done

I questioned myself

Within my mind

Where has everyone gone?

I was left alone,

Was it because I was never home?

 

 

Now I am alone

To face the fears

I never suffered all this years.

I search the house

A feeling of loneliness

Shrouded over me

In the living room

I saw a man

Looking out the window.

 

 

I couldn’t see his face

Yet I possessed no fear

I cleared my throat

To attract his attention

There he continued to stand

I tapped him on his shoulder

He turned, startled!

I looked at his face

T’was like looking

Into a mirror, I saw myself

He looked at me, he saw himself

We stood there,

Both looking out the window

Both left alone.

 

 

 

By: William Bonilla

“D’Artagnan”

10/12/08


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 Reviews of "I Met Myself"
Reviewed by Destiny Diadem
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Brilliant! Let's love our loved ones before they leave us.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
This is excellent poetry....very deep and painful. love Holly

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Wow....Wow, deep, William. If only we could meet ourselves before we make such mistakes. Remarkable reflection.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Reflections of love , loss , pain!.. Great write....M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
I tried once to run from my self, but I was too fast, I never got away
A great poem of reflections without involving mirrors

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
So many tiimes we are so busy with life's daily things, that we often neglect those who mean the most to us. This poem conveyed that message so well!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
this is excellent William! It deeply touches our emotions
because we all at times neglect those we love,and it can become
a habit...et

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
normally I have those thoughts after the right amount of a special vintage.
Great poetry!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
if we neglect those we love, we will surely lose them, as well as ourselves ... well penned, William ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
....William this is an amazing write,,I pray it is not a reality in your life..but you sure have given us much to look in within our being.
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
William...I'm sorry that you have had this pain...but hopefully, you will not waste another part of your life...Sometimes it is too late to "fix" things...but if it isn't..."try".... During my single days (until this June) I met several men who could have written that same story...almost verse for verse...and it's always sad... However...there is life after...and next time.. you don't work yourself to death...hurrying and trying to give the family everything "except you"....when you is who and what they wanted and needed most... The way you wrote this is exceptionally moving... Even thru this terrible pain, your talent emerges in a tender way.. lindalaw

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
I have said to one of my sons, you will wake up when it is too late and then that dreadful day came when she left with their three sons.
Your poem speaks of such sadness, I remember his tears as he looked at me and said "it's too late Mom". He met himself that day too William. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
So beautifully worded and expressed! The sadness and pain reaches out to the reader, touches the heart and makes them care! HUGS! SC

Reviewed on October 14, 2008
Powerfully heartfelt poem, William; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
Very powerful poem, William, It is always amazing how we evolve. Sometimes it takes a crisis for people to wake up, sometimes it takes a pivotal moment to fall in love with your own inner spirit, and at that moment it is when you realize just what is important....
Very thought provoking poem, one that has me thinking for sure.
Peace, love, and light, my dear friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
An intriguing, insightful, and heartfelt poem, William! Exceptionally well expressed!

Reviewed on October 14, 2008
Oh, this one hurts, William ... deeply. Agree with Bonnie (below): do you like who you see? Who do you want to see? Aim high, my friend. Well done.

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
Oh how sad but its never too late. Face yourself and be kind and forgiving but learn from what you see there. Then go and find that family of yours and love them with everything in you. Wonderful but sad write. Facing oneself is so hard and painful but it has to be done so you can grow into who you want to see in that mirror. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
I've been there..
Best wishes William
Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
A very sad tale, and as one who once hurried here and there, and everywhere - I can truly relate. These days, I take my time, and I always stop to smell those roses, and to give thanks for what I have.

Reviewed on October 14, 2008
A thought provoking write William, well penned.


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