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Confusing Dreams
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Confusing Dreams I woke with images flashing Through my head Incomplete and confusing dreams Like a montage on the wall. She straddled me Like a cowgirl Riding a wild pony Named Macaroni. Suddenly I was cooking Something sweet Splashing oil on a hot pan Sprinkling brown sugar Making Caramel. She took my tongue Between her soft lips Swallowing it gently Savoring it with pleasure. Slowly releasing it While inhaling its taste Making that delicious Wet moistening sound That drives men wild. The scene faded to black Where I found myself In Central Park Picnicking Eating frank and beans Spaghettis With marshmallows on the stick. On a table I sat with four Playing dominos I laid a tile facing up It turned into a Mahjong piece Where instead of reading dots I was confused With unknown characters Facing me She was so lovely She begged me not leave But my time was up I had to wake To a beautiful sunny morning All confused about her, me And the Montage on the wall. By: William Bonilla 11/29/08 “D’Artagnan”

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on January 15, 2009

I wish I had your imagination about Love, I do find love is great but mine is past and dead. But I enjoy reading these love poems and about others loves. I lve to read Harlequin romances still een. I am a romantic at heart and then I find I can pass the day happily.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Dreams are telling ya' something, but what...
Only your heart really knows William!
I had a few dreams recently, and one stuck in my mind long after, our ceiling opening up in a V shape and water trickling in and then it poured, I was scared and sweaty when I awoke
I think you were hungery before bed, Love your dreaming style! and imageries are striking!
That words straddled, conjures a wobbly YeeHaw feeling!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, Light and Love, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

STay Positive! Through the peace of life's serenity....

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 8, 2009

Well Looks Like You Have a Very Tastee appetitie for many hungers inside the expressions of "Confusing Dreams"
Sweetness, & Sensuality are all very delish
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

Food and fun and dreams!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

William, talk about dreams, I have been having some of my own. We should talk real soon about getting together for that book collab.
I feel we could really write a classic romance novel.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

I adored this journey into your dreamscape! It was a delight! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Dreams do take you on a wild ride, and what a ride you wrote about...wow...great job, William
peace and love to you, Carole~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

But my time was up,
I had to wake

It's terrible when time runs out on a marvelous dream, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by M. Teresa Clayton

Well, I read that one more than once. And, I must say, the dream became mine.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Intriquing write and it must be the time of year for lately I noticed many of our fellow poets as well as myself have posted poems on dreams and dreaming and this is indeed a great one.

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Reviewed by Georg Mateos

With that dream you woke up in a teepee! :-) LOL
Then again, she most be something special to set such an excellent poet afire! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Romantic, beautiful dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Happy New Year To you, Poet.
My son in law is a Ga. State Trooper for 7 years. This past week he had to take someone out. He is ok with it as am I. Sometimes schit happens. It is the job you have. Sad, but it happens. You understand, I know. My best to you and family for a Blessed New Year.

Walt

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 5, 2009

With all of these "Confusing Dreams"? It can only mean one thing, William. You were in a deep slumber <chuckles>, but I like your dreams, not so confusing to me... macaroni, franks, marshmallows and the making love...i think i wanna go deep sleep tonight, heheh. Wonderfully written!

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

William...profound write as usual from you my friend...its always a joy to read you...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Wow, a really fantastic dream William!
Sounds like a treat to me, even if confusing
all dreams are anyway, might have been several
different dreams. it is said we may dream up to
5 dreams in one night, that's why they are always
mixed up;-) Superb poem!...Eileen