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Fate And Obstacles
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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The sun rises after Dawn The sun sets as twilight fades You appear before my dreams I fell in love with you That was true . Bright pale blue Is the beautiful full moon In in a clear summer night Like the stars Sparkling in the sensuousness Of Your eyes Lighting The road before me. Fate has dealt us A raw hand Shrouding us with obstacles Left and right Keeping us apart Fate unfolds unholy episodes Breaking my passionate heart. Nothing in this world Can ever deter me from thinking of you Nor ever stop me from Wanting kisses To savor the sweetness Lacing the tenderness of your lips. Warm embraces whisper of naughtiness Setting passions aflame Dwell within my every thought Of you. By: William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” 01/18/09

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 28, 2009

SOMETIMES MEMORIES ARE ALL THAT WE ARE LEFT WITH, BUT THESE THOUGHTS SUFFICE...IF THEY HAVE TO. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 27, 2009

A beautiful ode, soft and memerizing , yet filled with sadness and longing......M

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 25, 2009

smooth as a phat babies bottom romantic verse William

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

outstanding in deep passion and longing! Always such a pleasure to read your poetry, William.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on January 24, 2009

Wiliam:

This was absolutely stunning!!!! I love every word of this!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Bitter-sweet, I have missed reading your sensual and passionate words.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 21, 2009

....all in a day..this is beautiful William!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Your pen always flows with the magic of passion and pure romance, William...still that silver tongued devil, aren't you
peace and love dear friend, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

The Musketeer is bitten! take all the maidens to asafe place! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

BEAUTIFUL AND VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Such beautiful sentiment expressed within your lines.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2009

Sounds like Bonnie's cupid has hit you with the arrow of love. LOL
I have mace!!!! He never nears me

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, your words touch me very deeply, longing for a love can be so heart wrenching.
I believe we are due for one of our collabs. What do you think?
Miss you,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

William,

INTENSE longing in beautifully imaged verse: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Splendid display of raw emotions of the one you love.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Bill,

What a beautiful write and sentiment. Your love will conquer anything.

Mary

Reviewed by Bonnie May

So beautiful a write William of a very strong and powerful love. Fate can't stop it from continuing in your tender heart. Love and hugs, Bonnie