On A Ledge (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

On A Ledge
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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To all my friends and writers of the den Please forgive me for being away from the den for so long, Been taking care of other pressing engaements neglecting my love of writing......and juggling my present surrounding ....whatever that means......I missed all you ladies and gentlemen.......and true poets
I search for you In my every loneliness And find you In every tear that falls From eyes That crave to vision Your loveliness One more time. My lips are parched For yours have not Blest them Nor graced them With the sweetness Of your kisses. Oh How I want so much To hold the softness Of your Voluptuousness In my embrace My heart aches for The warmth Of your tender body. Look into the depths Of my eyes And steal my soul Once more Before I die Don’t my darling Make me Once again cry. Place your head On my chest Listen To the true sounds Of loneliness A heart beating A soul dimming Embers Of passionate love Smoldering Into the grayness Of ashen despair. Look around you No one seems to care Don’t leave me there With my back to the wall Standing at a ledge With a decision to make Which I don’t dare. Reach out for me Gasp my hand Which I already have Stretched out Reaching for yours. By William Bonilla “D’Artagnan 04/01/09

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

DEAR WILLIAM, HIS SPIRIT OF LOVE AND YEARNING FILLED YOU TO OVERFLOWING AND YOU BARED YOUR SOUL...YOUR PAIN...OVER WHAT ONCE WAS... BUT ...IS NO MORE. THANK GOD FOR PRECIOUS MEMORIES, THE BEAUTY OF WHICH, THAT SOMETIMES...LEADS US TO THE EDGE... BUT THEN...'HE' BRINGS US BACK TO REALITY. BLESSINGS AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

I need a tissue
& a hug....this aches my heart in remembrances
beautifully of course
your love speaks the depths of passions voice
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Carol Grace

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

This poem speaks to me on many different levels. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.

Reviewed by Shay White

Reviewed on June 1, 2009

I too like the way the lines flow, imbuing such passion and depth. Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt vision.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

I love the way these lines flow, William. Beautiful and passionate. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on April 21, 2009

you have captured the essence of a dimming soul beautifully herein, william. always appreciate your creative vib!
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 20, 2009

Simply supurb! It touches ones heart with its message of yearning and desire.........M

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on April 17, 2009

How good it is to read your poetry again, William! You certainly haven't lost your talent for expressing passionate and romantic moments!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Hi William, what a passionate pleading write! A lot of feeling in this one.... thank you for sharing...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by jude forese

emotionally poignant and well written ...

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

These words, thoughts and feelings are STUNNING William!
Such true essence of who you are, deep within...
Loved reading and seeing the visions unfold!

WRITE ON!
Missed YOU, but do
what you must...
Warmest Blessings, Love, Light and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
I hope your EASTER was Special!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William,
This poem leaves me speechless! I shall respond in a bit to this.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Don't die yet, write more of these romantic poems that ladies here adore! Lovely write!

Cynthia

Reviewed by George Carroll

You are a true romantic and this poem graces your loving heart

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Romance scented with sincerity...beautiful William!
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Glad to see you posting, Mr. Romantic D'Artagnan!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

William,

Oh, you've been missed - yes, you have! Glad to know you're oksay (at least, I hope so) - what a write to tantalize us with! You perfect little angel. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

a powerfully emotional write-enjoyed

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Welcome back sweet man,Beautiful writing as always William..nice to read you again..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Quite romantic William as always.
Reminiscent of sultry whispers.

Take care,
((( SEMPER FI )))

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

William!! Where have you been, boy?? I have missed you!! Welcome back! Very well penned; you haven't lost your edge! Good to see you here!

(((HGUS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT OF GOLDEN, VERY TALENTED SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Hey! Musketeer...you got the maidens panting again! that's no fair to the poor slobs that are trying to send a curb ball, but we are happy that you are back. (but don't go kissing any guy!)

Georg

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

She is already in the hand of your loving heart beautiful William!
A beautiful, heartfelt piece!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 15, 2009

Beautiful, sensuous and romantic. So good to see you post again!