Brown Silent Eyes (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Brown Silent Eyes
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Brown silent eyes Brown eyes still Torment my dreams Those Brown eyes I wish to see my reflection From within. Lips that no longer Speak out my name In passionate sighs I crave to hear As they break the vowed Of silence Not to be cursed with The memory Of summer nights Once own in dreams. When my eyes were blest With your loveliness In a crowded room All became a blur Except you standing there, Your brown eyes Spoke silent words. The expression upon a beautiful face Was worth a thousand words For it read Like the scribed parchment Baptized by a poet’s Blood soaked quill That dripped from his Scared heart Where cupid’s arrow Still is pierced. My empty embrace seeks The warmth Of your Voluptuousness My lips are parched Like the arid sand Of hell They starve for the sweet nectar Lacing the softness of yours So I may kiss the beauty Of Brown eyes Reflecting me from within. By: William Bonilla D’Artagnan 07/ 13/09

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 13, 2009

'Tho beautiful, there is a sadness to your words, William, that I can't quite comprehend; an emptiness in those beautiful brown eyes. Keep loving, dear friend, as those moments shall, hopefully, pass.
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 31, 2009

William I have brown eyes, oh I guess this wasn't written for me but it is as Christine says breath-taking. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

oh my....breath-taking!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 28, 2009

This is how a woman likes to be loved - as though she is the only woman in the world. Lovely writing:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on July 26, 2009

Sweet William! This should kindle fire and fan the flame of desire! This should put the hunger back in her brown eyes! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Beautiful wriitng sweet man as always..I love your heart it shines..sighhhh...Hugss,much love to you..

Reviewed by Johanna Fields

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

A sad but lovely poem and great writting. William,hugs Johanna

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

William your poem touches ones soul. Its tender, romantic, and filled with sadness of lost love.....M

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

William....you have grown so much as a poet my friend...this one is a keeper for sure....written with much depth and passion....you are a joy to read my friend....its time to come out with a major poetry book my friend....Let the whole world read your poems....scatter them in the form of books or whatsoever, please....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Wow, beautifully penned indeed, held me captive with each word...great write from the depths of the heart. Enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Beautifully penned William, what a fine romance poet you are.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 19, 2009

D�Artagnan has emerged from his hiatus Thank you for this wonderfully romantic poem. I feel that I may have a bit of competition here, ummm, who is this brown eyed beauty that has you mesmerized?
Time to collaborate again my dear friend, your poem inspires the romantic in me.
As always a true romantic write from the best romantic poet!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

One word....WOW!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 18, 2009

Another beauty.

Reviewed by jude forese

lovely love poem ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

For me, it is green eyes but I can completely relate, William. A most compelling poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

So poignant and sad, William but beautifully written...

Carole~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

William, this is a fantastic love poem with some truly exquisite
lines especially 4th and last verses. Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Brown eyes, I'm a sucker for brown eyes. Steve

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

sad but lovely!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Beautiful write, William, love and loneliness are strange bedfellows. Well done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jms Bell

I ALWAYS KNOW WHEN I READ YOUR WORK THAT I'M GOING TO BE TAKEN ON A LOVELY JOURNEY OF LOVE AND DESIRE THAT TOUCHES OUR CREATOR'S HEART. ENJOYED AND WELL WRITTEN AND THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Oh brown silent eyes that don't look my brother anymore! Oh lips with no longer his name...love was busy working on my brother's heart and forgot hers.
Monsieur de Romantique I suppose?

Georg

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Passionate and distraught in equal measure, William, and I especially love that third stanza, which, with that little word "blur", for me gives the impression of the blinding mental fog of pain and confusion this poem conjures... blinded, except for, of course, those beautiful brown eyes.... Love-wrung and wrought to the uttermost. xx

Reviewed by George Carroll

A most romantic love poem spoken with an adoring heart.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Still the king of the romantic write & keep those hot breezes down there, just send us some warmer water temps...e