The Fantasy (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 22, 2010

love it William, about what some of us men go through everyday we pass a beautiful woman, good luck on your computer and hope your wife recovers asap, cheers

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on April 20, 2010

Well done, William!
So sorry about your lost work; sometimes a clean sweep is for the best. Afterall, the ideas, emotions and words live within. So take heart and carry on-- if not for you, then for the rest of us!
Hope your wife recovers without complication.
Blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

A wonderful sense of star-crossed lovers in this poem, William. Very sad. Sorry to hear about your lost work. Take care of you:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

happens many time i believe but you have captured it in your poem so perfectly

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

The sadness and heartache of farewell, a beautiful capture, William...Hope your wife feels better soon.
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 16, 2010

Maybe Gershwin had one when he composed his Blues Rhapsody...(LOL)

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 16, 2010

ROMANTIC and VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

nice poem and good to read your work again

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Too sad, Bill...e

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Heartache and acceptance and a great store of love, William, in this beauty of a poem.
I wish your wife a very speedy recovery.

John

Reviewed by Faye Beaulieu (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Wow, this was beautiful! :)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

William, this is so heart felt and beautifully written...it's good to read your work again.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

A deeply loving write, William; thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and healing,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

William,
What a beautiful fantasy poem...
Please give Norma my love and I will continue to send her healing energy...
I miss you, my friend...

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Wow! The ending wasn't what I expected, but it was awesome! Hope your wife is feeling better real soon. Sorry about your hard drive crash, sooner or later "every" hard drive crashes....that, my friend, is a fact I was informed of by a computer programmer.

Best wishes,
Anna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

..may summer bring you better days...this is heartfelt William!

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Hey William, I am sorry your wife is hurt I pray her knee will heal soon. This poem you are submitting was a wonderful romantic interlude.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Bill,

Lovely poem. It's so sad that these two never met again. Good-byes are hard. I'm so sorry about all of your hardships. I hope your wife is better now.

Mary

Mary

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 15, 2010

Parting is always difficult and the eyes tell the whole story.

George