You've grasped the moment quite nicely, William. Hugs,
Sheila

WELL, BY NOW I THINK EVERYBODY THAT IS A REGULAR ON AD SHOULD KNOW MY PHILOSOPHY ON POETS THAT FEEL THAT HAVE NOTHING TO SAY. I HAVE READ SOME OF THE BEST POETRY WHEN A POET JUST SHARES THIS FACT. A POET NEVER HAS NOTHING TO SAY 'CAUSE EVEN WHEN THEY THINK THEY ARE NOT SAYING ANYTHING...THEY ARE SAYING MUCH. I LOVE THIS WORK...TURNS OUT THAT YOU LEFT BOTH OF THE EMPTY WAITING ROOMS...THE POETS WAITING ROOM AND THE APPOINTMENT WAITING ROOM. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

captures the sensation of "emptiness" quite well ...

you really captured an "empty" feeling in this fine poem, William. Very unusual and well done!

Love,
Eileen

and may that be the last time you ever need to languish in
an empty waiting room!
wishing you good health, peace and bountiful blessings, william!
carolyn
ps--not to worry, your muse will reawaken.

A strong capture of that unsettling place and atmosphere that a waiting room is, especially an empty one with all its strange, unnerving possibilities.
Well expressed, William.

John

I really dislike sitting in waiting rooms. It give you too much time to think about why you are there.
You handled this very well.

So, your inspiration is missing in action, we will have to do something about that..

I will write something for us.

Talk soon,
Much peace, love and light,
Amber

confidant and confession
doctors private quarters
or the reporting eye witness
what ever the wait...the silence weighs heavy William
through your words and your soul
This poem is really very awesome to read
I was pulled deep inside my perception(s) of it
and the meaning...

Sounds of The Everglades (relaxation)
Vickie

William, I haven't been to a waiting room with a T.V. that's a great idea. Youur poem is simple, clean and well written. I hope things improve for you soon.

Cheers,
Dan

Well, I sure hope you exit with remedies to feel back to you, heartfelt William~
Blessings,
Christine

You do 'Slice of Life' quite well!

Sorry to hear about your computer woes, William. Glad you're back...so many of us sit in the rooms you describe...but I never thought about writing about it! Very creative!

Anna

poignant-i love it!

Compelling poem. Always, the difference is what's inside ~
Blessings,
Christine

'I am here to honor a sit within an Empty waiting room'....'I leave behind, the silence of an Empty waiting room'---------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Yesterday, I brought my youngest daughter, Molly to the doctor....the waiting room? JAMMED packed our visit was delayed one hour and ten minutes! I'll take an empty waiting room any day!

I always liked waiting rooms that are empty. The waiting in a crowded room gives me the shakes. This was a well crafted poem,
William. Good job.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

You have shared the exprerience very effectively through your verses here, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis