Very creative...it is the images that grasp us and take us into that escape...we are as weak as we are strong and yet it is all a realistic fantasy that we play with...even within our minds....
Powerfully sensuous write, William! Burning desire building with every phrase......hot stuff! Love romantic poetry......and yours is awesome! Beautifully done!
YES...THAT'S ME DOWN THERE, WILLIAM...FORGOT TO LOG IN. I SEE THAT I AM THE ONLY ONE THAT CAME FROM THIS POINT OF VIEW...SO...LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT MY INTERPRETATION OF THIS WORK. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
...YOU HAVE DARED, WILLIAM AND AS ALWAYS...THE PROFOUND COMPELLING BEAUTY OF POETRY'S SENSUOUS PRESENCE, WHICH YOU DESCRIBE SO ARTISTICALLY, AS A VISION OF A WOMAN...CAN ONLY BE SEEN, INTERPRETED AND APPRECIATED BY ANOTHER...WHO HAS BEHELD POETRY'S LOVELY MYSTERIES ALSO. SHE...THE GIFT OF POETRY... WILL NEVER LET US REST...AND I AM SO GRATEFUL TO HIM WHO GAVE HER TO US...AREN'T YOU? I LOVE THIS METAPHORIC WORK...! THIS IS A METAPHORE...IS IT NOT? OR...WERE YOU SLIPPING INTO ONE OF YOUR RICH 'FANTASIES', WHICH YOU SO SO WELL? AH, BE IT AS IT IS...WHICH EVER IT IS...A 'DIFFERENT' PERSPECTIVE IS ALWAYS...INTERESTING? THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
What's the difference between fantasy and reality, I wonder, where all the contact we have with the object of our intense affection is what we are able to receive and perceive through an "inanimate" screen? Yet it's skin's so real, no?! :)) So well-written my own knees are knocking here, William! May love and wisdom always be your guide. xx
William, breathtaking as always, you know how to pour your heart out. Yes always, you should dare, what do we have but this moment to live out our fantasies...
This is so very sensuous too William
what woman wouldn't want to know they have
this effect on a man...so sultry are your words
and the arousal of feelings...
William, This is fantastic. It's like you are speaking to all poets. I have to believe that anyone who has ever labored over a loving poem to their sweetheart has lived these same words. Most of us don't express them nearly so well, but we've sat before that blank screen, with deafening silence surrounding us, uncreated poetry and unborn words. I can't speak for anyone else, but I have also experienced that stirring within my loins as I toiled seeking the exact words to express myself. This is absolutely marvelous. Thank You, Dick
The pangs of love do that to a man and who can withstand a beautiful come hither smile and not be left with expectations of maybe to night I'll get lucky.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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lovely personification
and sensitive and knowing, too.
First rate!
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what woman wouldn't want to know they have
this effect on a man...so sultry are your words
and the arousal of feelings...
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