If I Erase You (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 21, 2011

There are some that one ought never to erase and in fact, I have found that they cannot be erased. Thank you, William. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 18, 2011

OHHH,WILLIAM...DO NOT ERASE HER...EVER.
a VERY ROMANTIC POEM WHICH I ENJOYED READING.
lOVE FROM
KAY...(excuse capitals too lazy to rewrite it...awesome poem Bill.)

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 16, 2011

URGH, I felt like I was closing the last page in a delicate book of LIFE here William!
What an endearing sweet loving poem!! That INSPIRATION that keeps your imagination strong and powerful, is enlightening! KEEP IT CLOSE! EMBRACE it (not too tight) and Love it sweetly!

WRITE ON!
Allow her closer and your writing will wisp away to dimensions beyond your control (What a Beautiful thought Huh)? :)

Sweet Sexy SHEE ox

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 17, 2011

I THINK WE CAN NEVER 'ERASE' OUR INSPIRATION...IT HAS ALWAYS BEEN THERE AND ALWAYS WILL BE THERE...ETERNALLY. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

Thinking deeply about the unthinkable can be a lonely and scary place, William. We only consider erasing that which is no longer valid, but if the "original" still persists, then the space created will soon again be filled... Poignant and beautifully expressed. xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

I loved Jude's comment. Never let her go, always keep her close, don't rock the boat.

Much peace, love and peace,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Beautiful heartfelt poem William!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Never let her go, William.......

Anna

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

always keep such things stored in your external hard drive ;)

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Such a beautiful poem of love enduring and I hope not to be erased!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ragno Donna

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

Then don't! Go for it, William, don't let her go.

Ragno

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

You will not do so willingly. Well written with such affable apprehension.
Janna

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

those priceless memories can never be erased, william!
beautiful sentiments herein,
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

Love may fade in time, we can even do things to try and keep our minds occupied, but our hearts never forget or allow us to erase.
fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

So don't erase her...its as simple as that...e

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

How does one erase someone from their memories, a sad and poignant thought, everyone that has ever touched us will leave pieces behine that we have to make piece with. Much love and peace to you dear friend, Carole~

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

A deep sadness here, William,
the fear of loss obviously...
and the loneliness after.
Written with fine touch and sensitivity.

John

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

I have doubts it will come to that but you paint a bleak picture if it does. Nicely done

George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

I guess Erasers can be both good and bad.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 14, 2011

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Glen Manese (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2011

You seem to reach a depth in the lines, yet leave room for a conclusion... as a reader clues in on the 3 stanzas... A sense of desperation, while contemplating reason within the issue... Thanks for sharing...