The repetitive quality lends an intensity to the poem that is a little intoxicating, leaving the reader with the feelings that he/she has fallen into the emotion you are writing about. Nicely done.
There is nothing like the euphoric feeling of love and believing it will last forever. Timeless, unending, and all consuming.
I felt your hear beating as you wrote this treasure...
Blessings dear friend.
Teresa
Passionate, loving and powerfully so are these verses and what they express, William. I know these feelings well. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
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This is such a beautiful heartfelt poem!
Makes me want to say: "I love You"
Much peace love and light
Amber
John
I felt your hear beating as you wrote this treasure...
Blessings dear friend.
Teresa
Ron
A fine love poem,
I don't care who you are.
~W~
Rebecca
Love ya!
Jane
Regis