No Shoulder To Cry On (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Hearts break for the call of freedom and the loss we give to make it fact. These lives gave theirs for peace and those who turn away are doomd to be an emotional nothing for life. I would give my life for peace instead of running from war and abusing a country with loud voices because I could speak without recourse. Let those that deny freedom is important leave this country and find freedom of press elsewhere but live poorly. This is why they stay...they couldn't make a million somewhere else and be heard.

Great and superior write.
Thank you,
Susan

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

This was beautiful! An excellent tribute!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Your words ache with the sensitivity of your soul, William. Exquisite write, my friend.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Excellent tribute William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Excellent poem.
Said I wasn't going to read any more war poems, but glad I stopped by for this one.
~E

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Well said.

Reviewed by Victoria Hunter

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

I'm completely speechless at this poem. You have a very strong talent in writing and very unique voice that is also intrigueing. This is an excellent piece. I know what it means and how it feels to have to cry alone. You gain a certain strength that can't help but show when you are not crying.

Very powerful piece indeed.

enjoyed!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

William, an excellent write about our troops, and you too.

yf

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Deeply moving dedication...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Well done William!
Jack

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

I appreciate your passion, but weep not for the brave that gave their lives, weep for the many who turn their backs on this great sacrafice. Shame be to them.

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

A beautiful tribute!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

So so so sad. My heart breaks for these young lives.. My heart breaks from your words.
~erica

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

William you can cry on my shoulder anytime...this is excellent and sad..Floria

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Willaim...This is excellent dedication...a great tribute i must confess....very very emotional write...love n luck...BHUWAN