A Walk Down The Hall (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Your poems always feel so real. In this case it was chilling to say the least.

Adam

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Interesting William, "opposite direction."

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Interesting and unique, so real yet unreal.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

this has so much depth of feeling William, really moves one, great work!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

excellent!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

To the very end I was locked in.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

A very compelling piece...very unique!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Whew William this had me goosebumps to tears and all every step of the way! Excellantly Done!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Oh, William.. there are goosebumps on my goosebumps.. the way you unfold this and bring us to its ending is gentle and quiet, yet the impact of realization is absolutely stunning.. I have never read of death with such sensitivity.. a beautiful piece. katy.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

;��( Man....!!! Have any tissues for me?

Teresa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Oh dear, This one got to me, so beautiful, so very well done, I loved this so much, just touched me deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Hey William,
You had me going there with that peaceful start.You can actually just change a couple of sentences and stay as peaceful. I still like the last couple of lines.Great write again my friend.

tony

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Very powerful! An excellent piece, William
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Powerful write!!
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Wonderful...

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Well, William...this message is deep. I, too, want to see the lighted end of the hall, but through it, also! Thank you.
-Bear