I just turned 60
But a few weeks ago
Don't know where to go
With is
Lets give it a try.
~~*~~
I fancy not myself
Twenty years from now
Staring into space
In the lounge of this
Unfamiliar place.
~~*~~
Wondering
What I did wrong?
Why my kids, place me
In this nursing home.
~~*~~
I, the wise guy
Was testing their will
Wondering
How much affection
I could steal.
~~*~~
Causing a defection
Of affection
From their direction
You following this?
Wondering.
~~*~~
I am aware
Of my surroundings
Or am I, just a silly old man
Just Wondering
~~*~~
I remember, being strong
On me, My family depend
Now, I have no control
I lower my head
And look away in shame.
~~*~~
Wondering
What they gonna say
As they change me
They berate me
A tear just fades away.
WHAT A DIFFERENCE 9 YEARS CAN MAKE. I DON'T THINK YOU HAVE TO 'WONDER' ANYMORE. BY NOW, I THINK YOU KNOW...THAT YOU'RE LOVED AND NO MATTER WHAT YOUR CONDITION, ALWAYS WILL BE LOVED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
wisdom come with age... creativity keeps us young...
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Oh this kills me you know. I have a friend who had just turned 56 and he is in this state of pondering as well... I am so much younger but I worry about these things already from time to time... know you are loved
Oh William this is so touching! having worded in geriatrics I know the fear, and it's all too real. However,I can tell you have a mind that won't quit my friend, just keep writing and thinking as young as you are;-)!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Your not old as long as you think young....
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Too many people in that situation. 60 ? You are just a kid yet. [smiles] Nicely done, William.
its okay to lower your "haed" as long as you don't lower your head instead....lol!!
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Nothing more than you've been round the sun more times, my parents in 80's they still happy at own house after 50+years together, age is a number I know people 40 years old and 80 years young...
Same as Katy, William! And thoughts that I have been pondering of late! Thank you for your wonderful words!
-Bear
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
William.. I am just collapsed with this.. you are self-effacing, without any underlying current.. making your work so very appealing.. you write with complete truth.. you are utterly amazing in your ability to give yourself to your words... always a treat, William. katy.
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Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
I pray that you will be forever loved and respected. Blessings, Diane
Reindeer
You still have a brilliant mind. Keep writing friend.
~Joseph
How heartfelt this one is.
Hey you, 60 is not old..:)
You are as young as you allow your heart to feel..
Trixie :)
Love
Tinka
good write
john+
-Bear