DAD (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

I think your Dad did a really good job raising you and would be (IS) proud of you.
May this loving poem come back from your own kids to bite you in your heart.
Blessings,
Diane

Reviewed by Buddy Angel

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

What a great tribute to your father, thanks for sharing.

Buddy

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

William
What a beautiful tribute to your father whom you obviously loved very much
~ Chrissie

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Beautiful tribute!!! There should only be more like this these days...

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

He sounds like a wonderful man. Who wouldn't wish for a son to compose as beautiful and as loving a tribute as this. You miss him very much, don't you? Sending you positive vibes today, William. He would be proud to read this.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

excellent... (my father was born the same year)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Excellent tribute to your Father!!
Thanks for reminding me.....lol!!

I made an error on my last post...was suppose to end like this...

The windows is starless�. Still
The clock is ticking�
It�s past midnight
I rest my pen� sleep

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

William...This is superb write...very very superb write...a gem...a masterpiece...thank u so much....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Oh William this is a SPLENDID WRITE AND TRIBUTE that touched me ever so this night and year...almost lost my father at Easter due to a heart attack...he had a quadruple bypass and is now doing fine. I am saddened at yours and anyone else's loss BUT I revel with you in such sweet, tender, touching reminiscing!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

William This is an excellent tribute to your Father and the fathers here. Wonderful poetry.
Peggy

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Fine memories, Sir. You did them justice.

Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Wonderful tribute William, beautifully expressed!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Nice tribute, William. My father (1911-1971) was a contemporary of your father's. Thanks for sharing.
Leland

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Oh William,
This nearly made me cry...
Such a beautiful tribute
to your father....
Oh how some memories can
be so precious and everlasting...

Wonderful write

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

This was such a lovely tribute to your father, so very beautiful..Happy father's day,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

Thank You William for sharing this exceptional writing. May our Dads rest in the Lords care.

tony

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

beautiful write, william! :) (((HUGS))) happy father's day to you and all the dads here at the den! :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 4, 2003

(((o william)))

your dad would be so proud of this

beautiful tribute to him *i'm sorry for your loss*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(