Moments in my thoughts (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by abhishek bhardwaj (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2003

heart warming attempt to show the dillemmas of a war-trodden soldier

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wow..This was wonderful, excellently written, I liked this very much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wonderful work, William.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Oh man...does this piece bring back memories.
Excellent work, William

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Hi William,
Oh this one placed a lump
in my throat...

Beautiful...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

William, this is a very heart-wrenching and excellent write.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Outstanding, William! Reality sucks too often, a moment of memories can either hurt, or help. Sometimes the difference is oblique. :)

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

marvelous write..I couldn't imagine the fear and aloneness felt on the battlefield
but in your write I feel the despair in the battle for life's exsistance
Mister

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

~Excellent William..
I could almost smell the
gunpowder and fuel in
your words. This is what
poetry is all about. Your
gift abounds in this
write, my friend.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Powerful and heart touching write, William.

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

That is brilliant.. the voice of a police man is present in every line.. and yes, you change our views of cops.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

This made me think for a while...very lonesome and pulling the heartstrings apart!!
Memories can cause sooooooo much pain at times!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

excellent poem... luv "As they slink, in the darkness
Crawling through the barb wire
Of my sanity"

Reviewed by abhishek

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

beutiful poem about a lonely soldier.poet has aptly captured the feelings of a lost soul in the battle field.

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Excellent message on the futility of war for the soldiers that do the actual fighting - and dying!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wow! Bill ... one needs to reflect on this poem before commenting. Just thinking about
being in the trench and hearing the Christmas sound is more than enough to drive the mechanism of this poem. It would be the rare human being who could not hear this and identify with the warrior in the trench. Bill