The Chase (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 16, 2007

Good evening William,

Finally found the time to come back to th authors den.
BOOOO! oohh!This is a great, scary one for halloween.....have you
thought about expanding it into a full story? Well Done! Monique

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 22, 2004

Yikes...Such an intensed
dream i'd say...

Well penned...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 22, 2004

very intense dream, well penned!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 22, 2004

What a dream. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 22, 2004

Awwww...what a nightmare...I knew that figt was won by me..........hehehehe!!

Electrical super charged write William!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Exceptional!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Chilling write,William. like a nightmare, but sometimes we have visions of ourselves doing things we can't understand, I agree with Susan...Excellent write...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

This is really excellent William.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Oh wow...this was absolutely outstanding, excellently chilling!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Wow! This is pretty ssssccccaaaarrrrrryyyyyy!!!!!!!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Or one could look at it this way, he consumed his prey ( woman) the other way! :):) He took her, all of her, and the blood from this virginal woman was the evidence left hehe.

Ch'erie

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

This is gruesome and excellently written...are you hanging aound
with kate by any chance?.....heh heh...well done...
very chilling William..floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Exciting and great descriptions!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

In all of us there dwells a creature's spirit. I have been the wold, the woodstork the dragonfly and so much more. It is a part of the Muse that connects us to our environment. It helps us see the inner spirits of our world. Thank you for giving me a glimpse and for allowing this woman to run with your wolves.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

(((william)))

you don't WANT to know what i dreamt LOL

but this one gave me the creeps *shivers* the ending, i didn't expect AT ALL--well written, great job!

(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla.

no more snacks before beddy bye LOL

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

This is excellent, William!