You're All Invited to a Barbeque (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Too rank for my taste. Throw him to the hogs.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Roast the PIG!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Most excellent Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Clever write and visual and dynamite message - is it rocket-fuel you've got in that bottle?! We could just send him off to repopulate a planet more akin to his liking and temperament - any suggestions?! This must have been the sentiments Guy Fawkes had in mind with his Gunpowder Plot - but ironic that it is now HE who sits atop our November bonfires!! Take care you don't get burned! Kate xx

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

APPLAUD! this is awesome.

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Funny, gorgeous poem. Osama - a person we despise, hate. Be it as it may, even Osama is part of the mirror which echoes our very existence, a distorted mirror which can tell something about us. franz

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

very appetizing proposal ...

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Shades of "Fried Green Tomatoes!"

I never heard of an Osama BBQ before...
Oh...isn't that what this is???

You're so clever, girl.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

hahaha! You rock Susan!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Susan, a very creative and funny take on a subject we all hold dear.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

A bbq is nothing new,
But to do so with old Osama,
It might be good to take also his mama,
After all she did give birth,
To this madman of the Islamic faith,
She raised him fully realizing he was a jerk,
Now it is time to cook him over the fire,
His ashes will make such a good tribute,
To those that have fallen, 9/11 families will be inspired...

The humor is welcomed as is the bbq, give me directions and I will be there too, can I bring some herb to sprinkle on his remains? Peace thru BBQing, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

WOW this is good Susan................ Loved the HUMOR!!!!

~pEace always~
LP

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Good one...but I wouldn't want to eat that.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

i'll be there! LOL but you may have bitten off more than you can chew with this one; glad i didn't write it....LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

This is a good one!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

(((Susan)))

o, my, you may have bitten off more than you can chew--this is sure to raise a few eyebrows. but i'm on my way!!!!!!!!! LOL

i'll bring the pop, too :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) LOL