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To Dream Awake
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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By Susan de Vegter

I tucked my pillows all around
So not to feel alone
Into the quiet dead of night
I ached for you into my bones
As yearnings pierced each silent wail
Into a void I groped and fell
Until my lonely twisted aches
Slipped me to sleep
To dream awake.

Copyright 2006


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 Reviews of "To Dream Awake"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
I love the emotion here...........
this is far reaching
pax A

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Dreams can become so strong that we do no longer need the circumstance of sleep to allow them to touch our awareness. This is when we begin to become one with the universal consciousness. It changes everything, overwhelms all powers we believed to be invanquishable. It allows us to change what was beyond our ability to change before.

RAge

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
The depth of the message with the small count of the words is a correlation not oft achieved. Great write, your talent and flow go before you. Art

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Restlessness and aching . . . A bad way to have to dream, perchance to . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
This one touches close to home,almost like you were reading my own thoughts. Well conceived and well written.

Fee

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
~~Susan~~touching and beautiful poem~~i'll return to dreams~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Par excellence....I dream more awake than asleep....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
A very intense feeling of longing and need surfsce in this concise and succuinct composition, Susan..
The Ache of Love is overpowering and is best placed in the hands of our Creator, from whence it came !
Love and Peace
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Deeply moving poem Susan! Superb execution!

Eileen

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
beautiful image. I agree with karla. excellent poem of longing and loneliness

Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Susan,

Oh, my...a c h i n g loneliness in your poignant verse; emotion, very well expressed. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Great longings well-expressed in a few lines.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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