Honeycomb Words (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 9, 2006

You really got rolling... it's easy to guess what happens next.

Ron

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

"Nouns of endearment verbs hot to handle truth spoken here love's such a gamble" This is life, really like this Pierre.

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

~~Susan~~like the tempo of this poem..wonderful~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

A sweet treat, indeed, your beautiful words, Susan; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

A very lovely piece, and I love that photo, too.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Oh Susan why didn't we meet a hundred years ago, this poem would have melted my heart and raised my blood pressure. Romance personified.

Fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Love the spot-on "riding rhythm" of this, SusanKdeV... you are SUCH an intuitive writer and, more than that, have such ease in capturing the words and images that expertly express that intuition well: inexpressible to most of us! This is delicately raunchy and passionately strong - and I love the tension that creates with the fragility of the tender visual and luscious dripping honeycomb!! SWEET indeed! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Susan

A time honoured love poem that allays all fears and anxieties..

Peter

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Rhyme and rhythm are perfect in this romantic poem. Victor

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

a sensually stimulating moment of endearment ... great rhyme!

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Damn, you make rhyming lok so easy! However, I know better, so you won't see any coming from me. This is all of what your fans say it is, and I vote you, Sweetest Poet on Paper ! ! !

A keeper... proving that simple words say far more.
- Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Susan this is so smooth and sensual,love it! A good mood to be in;-)Thanks sis!;-)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

This is cute.

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Most beautiful Susan..!! Lovely..

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Metaphoric of the bee hive, building and cleaning love, feeding the young, and fiercly guarding the "hive"! Time for some mead, honey wine Susan...I just brewed me a fall batch. I have a great recipe. The bear that profits from the spillage of honey suggests that even brute animals can be pacified by the influence of honey. Go get you some honey! Tame that brute!

Sage

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Absolutely sweet...nectar upon the page.
Beautiful poem, Susan.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

this was so easy to read, the words just flow

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Wonderful write indeed! I love the atmosphere and the choice of words in this one.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)