I've roughed it long enough now
My loneliness is over
I'm acting like a silly child
I run and smell the clover
I know that clouds are beautiful
I've soared among a few
I see another world right now
And it's all because of you
The vastness of a cobalt sky
While lover's fly above
It's wonderful to spread your heart
When you put a face on love.
It's a whole new world of butterflies
Dancing all inside
It's giggles under cotton sheets
A slow erotic ride
It's smiles so wide they break your face
It's waiting for that shove
Then gently giving back a push
When you put a face on love.
Colors seem to be enhanced
While fingers feel like satin
When you strive for eloquence
It sounds just like Pig Latin
Emotions are as raw as nerves
They handstand end-to-end
You tear at ... even happiness
As new rhythms start to spin
Your eyes shoot sparks like bullets
Just like lightening bugs
Your days bloom like new flowers
When you put a face on love.
True love can work wonders...but then you need again you don't need to put a face to it....it lives within....and makes the face glow...even in the darkest moments of life....GOD knows I know what I just said are possible!!
Hey where did you get my "shaved" picture...lol!!
Anyways...this id a gripping beauty you penned here Susan!!
Susan the great heart weaver of love has spoken again and with her words I see the beauty that is love unfold on the page before me. Thank you for putting voice to what so many have felt. Hugs.
Fee
You are among the few here who can turn phrases which are not cliched or used so frenqently. You're psyche is such that you can coin a phrase which means so muuch more than us mere, quote poets unquote. Things like "It's wonderful to spread your heart / When you put a face on love." THAT, among others, is just fantastic.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Sheer ecstacy when one finally finds true love. Your love poems are lovely to read. Victor
The energy fair EXPLODES off the page here, Susan, and is a delight that is infectious... how wonderful that moment when the obscured partition is removed that perhaps has been causing blurring of love shadows for all time previous, and BINGO!! The One is revealed in no uncertain terms. Love the clear focus in this and the break-neck pace. Like a gallop across the plains. WONDERFUL and exhilarating, thank you. LOL K xx
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
AAaaaawwwwwww...Susan, YOU are precious..Soar angel, soar, soar, soar!!!!!!YES!!!!!!! Your such a light from the Father~~~
Indeed Belle, you have a river that flows through you that stuns me. So much inside that you share with others. Such talent as yours is truly another face of love.
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Love, Pierre
I agree with Tinks below..
Her comments closely mirror my own sentiments..
Shalom
Peter
When you put a face on love.
And what a poetic face you've captured here, Susan.
Hey where did you get my "shaved" picture...lol!!
Anyways...this id a gripping beauty you penned here Susan!!
Love Tinka
Allen
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Eileen
Fee
Ron
Love, Dove
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