Uncommitted?
"Yep he said...scared to death as he bled."
Uncommitted?
"You got it babe...gone before...became a slave."
Uncommitted ?
"Yes indeed...got no more pain to bleed."
Uncommitted?
"I say to you...can you take a ribbing too?"
Uncommitted?
"Yep!" he said..."Scared to death as he bled."
Uncommitted?
"You got it babe...gone before and became a slave."
Uncommitted ?
"Yes indeed. Got no more pain to bleed
Uncommitted?
"I say to you...can you take a ribbing too?"
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Playful puns of rhyming factions vying for that bloated action
You are serious when I have fun...you want loved...forget it Hon
I'm not feeling more than you I just want to up and choose
The love that passion sends devoted while yours is blushed and sugar coated
Dedication, that's my way...can't seem to get past older days
When devotion was the integral part when love of loves grew in the heart
When racing time was all you had between giving with the good and bad
I'm better off when I give...it helps the me that needs to live
It aids the crux of passions plead to be with thee and meet your needs
Trust in me I'll wait for you I'll make a bed of love so true
That envy would be of Gods who peered upon the bed of loving years
The ones with passions and ability to make a love without humility?
To stand behind the thick and thin and go for broke not "what if it'd been"
Different for the scope of you who commits their love...not one but two
The thought of thee before myself...the end each night within love's wealth
The holding arms and legs in bed and knowing that this love is fed
It's worry free and mixed emotions coming with the deep devotion
Devotion means to commit or nothing else will make this fit.
Your last line pulls the threads tight. Both need each other to be complete. And completeness needs both elements as a strong foundation from which to build upon.
Powerful message and very creative I also like the instructional note for this... Commitment is harder than they afmit at times and I think also keep those definitions for furture ..... Thanks,
Joselyn
Commitment...devotion the obvious requirement of some and the game of others who only can pretend and balk when the truth comes out or push comes to shove...best to hang on to definition and values...
Love,
Taylor
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Lovely poem, though I think love does has its ups and downs. The important thing is to keep it alive. Victor
A mixture of conventional and personal ideas over the mutual understanding that friendship merges into love and how it is shown. "They do not love that do not show their love." Love for one another should be also expressed in nonphysical ways in the interchange of ideas and the common enjoyment of some pleasure. Uncommitted represents a setting for courtship, Susan...to accomplish a fusion of love and commitment is infusion of new blood, the addition of new feelings absorbed in everlasting unity...
Some people have such pretty words but all that really matters is the intent and the commit to fit is a fantastic line from you Sis! another wisdom write wrapped in playful talk, but oh what a great message!...Eileen
Commit to the fit
makes alot of sense to me, why waste time....I like your pace here, but most of all your wisdom and heart......sometimes its fun to joke, with the right person
pax A
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What provokes these words from you, So beautiful. Pierre.
Powerful Belle ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Much depth of thought here. Top write...
Joselyn
Love,
Taylor
love & peace
William
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Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
Dove
makes alot of sense to me, why waste time....I like your pace here, but most of all your wisdom and heart......sometimes its fun to joke, with the right person
pax A
You will always find Devotion in the small details..
Love and Peace
Peter
Hugs,
Fee